Allyson, if you still need a pair of eyes, shoot it to me. Oh, what am I saying, I want to read it anyway, if it's okay with you.
And Barb, that's appalling. But somehow I'm not surprised.
You're wrong about River. River's not on the ship. They didn't want her here, but she couldn't make herself leave. So she melted... Melted away. They didn't know she could do that, but she did.
River ,'Objects In Space'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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Beverly - Sep 02, 2008 11:32:46 am PDT #846 of 6732
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Ginger - Sep 02, 2008 11:35:58 am PDT #847 of 6732
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
You know, I have this rash.....
Barb - Sep 02, 2008 11:39:05 am PDT #848 of 6732
“Not dead yet!”
You know, I have this rash.....
Pbbbbbbbblllllllltttttttt
(Or, if My Big Fat Greek Wedding advice is to be believed, a spritz of Windex will clear that right up.)
Burrell - Sep 02, 2008 11:41:40 am PDT #849 of 6732
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
Allyson, you can send it to me too. I may be busy but I'm not too busy for you.
lisah - Sep 02, 2008 11:46:37 am PDT #850 of 6732
Punishingly Intricate
Burrell that reminds me that I totally owe you feedback! My brain has been vacationing these last couple weeks.
Allyson - Sep 02, 2008 12:16:36 pm PDT #851 of 6732
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
laga, have you read any of it or should i send you chapters 1-4?
Laga - Sep 02, 2008 12:50:25 pm PDT #852 of 6732
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.
I haven't read any of it but what you posted on line. I'd love to read it from the beginning!
Allyson - Sep 03, 2008 6:01:21 am PDT #853 of 6732
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
insent to all with thanks.
I made Samwriter open your edits, Bev, I'm too scared.
Beverly - Sep 03, 2008 6:27:26 am PDT #854 of 6732
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Oh honey, you know I'm gentle. Plus, there's never much wrong.*
I am curious what he had to say, comparing his and yours, though. I was not ruthless with his chapter, but I was honest, and I winced about it a little bit after I sent it. He wrote me the sweetest thank you note.
*Where "wrong"="might need to be tweaked."
Barb - Sep 03, 2008 7:18:29 am PDT #855 of 6732
“Not dead yet!”
I was not ruthless with his chapter, but I was honest, and I winced about it a little bit after I sent it.
Bev is me here. I was the same way, wincing and all. which Allyson well knows.