You know, I just... I woke up, and I looked in the mirror, and I thought, hey, what's with all the sin? I need to change. I'm... I'm dirty. I'm, I'm bad with the... sex and the envy and that, that loud music us kids listen to nowadays.

Buffy ,'Lessons'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Beverly - Sep 01, 2008 7:37:27 am PDT #842 of 6737
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Very pointy, Ginger. Nicely done.


Allyson - Sep 02, 2008 7:45:45 am PDT #843 of 6737
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Any available readers for chapter 3 final and chapter 4 draft today or tonight?

Mostly need four. Ate my brain. Too preachy maybe.


Laga - Sep 02, 2008 8:55:42 am PDT #844 of 6737
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

Allyson I'd love to read your stuff. I'm lagarat at gmail.


Barb - Sep 02, 2008 9:51:04 am PDT #845 of 6737
“Not dead yet!”

Venting quietly in here, because if I vent where this happened, I will be looked upon as a Green Meanie of the highest order. But seriously, who on earth thinks it's okay to break their longtime lurking on a professional writers' loop with a post asking for medical advice??

And what's worse, the number of responses/commiserations (not sure which because I was just hitting delete like a madwoman) was absolutely astounding. A post asking a legit writing question goes virtually ignored while the medical advice brings on all comers. And again, professional writers loop.

::facepalms::


Beverly - Sep 02, 2008 11:32:46 am PDT #846 of 6737
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Allyson, if you still need a pair of eyes, shoot it to me. Oh, what am I saying, I want to read it anyway, if it's okay with you.

And Barb, that's appalling. But somehow I'm not surprised.


Ginger - Sep 02, 2008 11:35:58 am PDT #847 of 6737
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

You know, I have this rash.....


Barb - Sep 02, 2008 11:39:05 am PDT #848 of 6737
“Not dead yet!”

You know, I have this rash.....

Pbbbbbbbblllllllltttttttt

(Or, if My Big Fat Greek Wedding advice is to be believed, a spritz of Windex will clear that right up.)


Burrell - Sep 02, 2008 11:41:40 am PDT #849 of 6737
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!

Allyson, you can send it to me too. I may be busy but I'm not too busy for you.


lisah - Sep 02, 2008 11:46:37 am PDT #850 of 6737
Punishingly Intricate

Burrell that reminds me that I totally owe you feedback! My brain has been vacationing these last couple weeks.


Allyson - Sep 02, 2008 12:16:36 pm PDT #851 of 6737
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

laga, have you read any of it or should i send you chapters 1-4?