Ohh...that's pretty painful, W. Nicely done, though.
Jayne: What're you gonna tell the others? Mal: About what? Jayne: About why I'm dead. Mal: Hadn't thought about it. Jayne: Make something up. Don't tell 'em what I did.
'Ariel'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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Beverly - May 08, 2015 2:28:01 pm PDT #6256 of 6687
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
SailAweigh - May 08, 2015 2:36:42 pm PDT #6257 of 6687
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Wow. You folks are knocking them out of the park this week.
SailAweigh - May 08, 2015 4:43:55 pm PDT #6258 of 6687
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Never Better
She closes the door behind her. It's late, later than she'd meant to be. Shoes in one hand, the other on the wall as a guide, she shuffles down the hall. Even ten years familiarity doesn't obviate the need for guidance in the pitch black. It's slow going. Sticking to one side of the hall, she skirts the floorboards in the middle that squeak: an extra long step ri-i-i-i-ght there. She keeps her gaze averted from the closed door along the opposite wall. No matter if it were open, anyway. It was too late for them a long time ago.
Wolfram - May 10, 2015 1:57:34 pm PDT #6259 of 6687
Visilurking
Nice one, SA.
SailAweigh - May 10, 2015 3:50:41 pm PDT #6260 of 6687
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Thanks, Wolfram.
FYI, there's a board member actually named SA, so folks usually shorten my moniker to Sail to avoid confusion.
Amy - May 10, 2015 4:28:40 pm PDT #6261 of 6687
Because books.
I love that, Sail.
Yay drabble writing people!
I'm trying to be proactive, so even though it's early, this week's prompt is: burn .
Wolfram - May 11, 2015 7:16:41 am PDT #6262 of 6687
Visilurking
FYI, there's a board member actually named SA, so folks usually shorten my moniker to Sail to avoid confusion.
Thanks, Sail. I won't edit it now, but I'm kicking myself because I actually knew that. I blame old age.
Yay, new prompt!
Wolfram - May 11, 2015 10:51:58 am PDT #6263 of 6687
Visilurking
Shift
Have you ever felt that little thrill when you're reading the news and your local city or town gets mentioned? You know like when you read FARMINGTON MAN WINS POWERBALL or RECORD SNOWFALL IN POUGHKEEPSIE, and you know other people are reading it too? It's cool, right?
Sometimes you'll see something closer to home - BURGLARY SPREE ON MCELHENNEY BLVD. You'll be like, geez that's just two blocks up, better lock my doors. But you'll still get that little tingle.
I saw the headline on my AOL newsfeed. AUDREY LANE HOUSE FIRE TRAGEDY, TRAVELING DAD STILL NOT INFORMED.
No longer true.
Beverly - May 11, 2015 10:53:57 am PDT #6264 of 6687
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Oh. Ouch. Nicely done.
SailAweigh - May 11, 2015 11:41:02 am PDT #6265 of 6687
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Oh, man. That is definitely a kicker.