Good one, erika.
'The Killer In Me'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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Very nice way to work Pink into it, erika. Suits the mood of the piece completely.
Seriously. That was awesome. (Also, I love that song.)
Me too. My mother relates to it more because she thought she'd found a husband to be her best friend, but then he cracked up and stuff and we found out that some of those late nights weren't about work.(And then, of course, you can never be sure how many, right?)
I did it again. Sorry.
This week's prompt is late.
I live my life late.
I'm punctual; it's just that --
my mind lives in night.
Even though I’m not that old, there are already things it’s too late for.Some are ridiculous, like teen stardom, some are heartwarming/corny, like marrying my childhood sweetheart(although I started late to even have one) At least, I can’t ever be on “Teen Mom”, there are things to be said for late blooming. I try to focus on the present moment, although sometimes it makes me feel like an older woman wearing a younger woman’s mental clothes.I tell myself I won’t miss my chance again, but will I know it when I see it? I hope so.
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Erika - very poignant and hopeful and...familiar.
Strix, yours is familiar in a very different way.
Anyway, well done ladies!
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Thank you. Someday I might write about candy and rainbows(Actually kinda doubt it, but who knows?) Yeah, I related to Strix's too.
Great ones, Strix and Erikaj!
I was supposed to do one last week, and I just couldn't get into the head space. This one is for both prompts.
Truth
"Maybe it's wrong." He tries to say it gently, but she can hear him straining.
"I took it twice." She feels her face getting hot. She steadies herself on the edge of the sink.
His silence is clear. She knows what he's thinking about, and she starts to sob.
He knocks again. Softly. "Please."
She reaches behind her to unlock the door. She won't face him. She doesn't want to see his pain.
"This doesn't change anything." They both know he's lying, but it's a kind lie.
He puts his arms around her.
She hates him now more than ever.