And what's the fun in becoming an immortal demon if you're not regular, am I right?

The Mayor ,'End of Days'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


erikaj - Mar 26, 2013 12:34:23 pm PDT #5606 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!

Well, I think if he or she is your lead, you're putting him through something, right?(FyI, I read the 90 day novel too. Some was helpful, some not.)


Connie Neil - Mar 26, 2013 12:48:23 pm PDT #5607 of 6690
brillig

The character may not change but may have to dig deep to cope with issues. Maybe show hints of some inner strength/talent that they don't think much of or which they ignore that comes in handy by the end. Some hint of stubbornness or intelligence or something that they have to tap into. IE, a person who's proud of their strength and shrugs off their native brains who has to think their way out of trouble. And vice a versa.


Typo Boy - Mar 26, 2013 2:09:06 pm PDT #5608 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Hmm. My character who has always been blunt and snarky will find herself having to use diplomacy to persuade powerful entities who are at best indifferent and often hostile to her to join her cause. Maybe that counts as digging deep.


Connie Neil - Mar 26, 2013 2:48:48 pm PDT #5609 of 6690
brillig

It's kind of a change but not something brand new.


Amy - Mar 26, 2013 3:18:59 pm PDT #5610 of 6690
Because books.

Typo, it sounds like you should probably write the story as you envision it, and then see what you have when you're done. It's hard to anticipate everything that will happen in the process of writing, but trying to work this stuff superficially isn't usually a good idea.

Jennifer Crusie writes what she calls the "Don't Look Down" Draft, which is essentially writing out the story without a lot of stopping or self-editing. Then you read it and see what book it is that you've written, which is often not exactly the book set out to write. At that point it's easier to see what your characters have gone through, and what you need to do to make the story work well.


Typo Boy - Mar 26, 2013 4:50:26 pm PDT #5611 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Makes sense to put off that question until after the first draft. I am, as Kress suggests going to finish my scene list before I start the draft. I tried "just putting it down" before and got stuck at 12,000 words cause I did not know what happened next. But even after I do the scene list I will expect the first draft to need major rewrite, not just editing.


Gudanov - Mar 27, 2013 5:34:54 am PDT #5612 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I'd say finish the first draft so you know the story and the characters, then try to figure out what the physical plot and emotional plot need to be. Everybody is different, but for me the first draft is more a guideline than what's going to be the final manuscript after some edits.


Amy - Mar 27, 2013 5:56:03 am PDT #5613 of 6690
Because books.

What Gud said.


erikaj - Apr 01, 2013 7:46:24 am PDT #5614 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!

On kind of a hot streak with something new(Which...yay,) Except for, trying to make those scene changer things like "***", I got a big dark line that is now following me through all my pages. Argh!


Amy - Apr 01, 2013 8:03:11 am PDT #5615 of 6690
Because books.

Use different characters, or just hit backspace right away and it should remove the line.