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Danger's my birthright.
Buffy ,'The Killer In Me'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Amy - Apr 01, 2013 8:03:11 am PDT #5615 of 6690
Because books.
erikaj - Apr 01, 2013 8:35:31 am PDT #5616 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!
it didn't. Damn it.
Liese S. - Apr 05, 2013 11:33:48 am PDT #5617 of 6690
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."
So I got some great feedback on the songwriting contest I enter every year. This year I entered two pieces, a completed song and one that was just lyrics. I scored worse on both pieces, but I got really good written critique. Here's the lyrics one:
COMMENTS: This piece is full of intriguing poetics and clever wordplay. However what and who these lines are referring to is never made clear. Keep in mind that publishers favor themes that have a focused premise and emotional impact. So try to paint a more vivid picture of whom and what the words are about (while not assuming that the listener already knows). There is talent here so keep writing and learning the craft!
Lots of good, specific stuff I can work from. And I rated better in some categories than I have in the past, things I was specifically working, so I feel like I'm getting better. I really like this contest.
Burrell - Apr 05, 2013 11:45:21 am PDT #5618 of 6690
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
Good for you, Liese. Good comments are key!
Amy - Apr 05, 2013 5:30:44 pm PDT #5619 of 6690
Because books.
It's always great to get constructive feedback. Very nice, Liese!
hippocampus - Apr 08, 2013 4:08:00 am PDT #5620 of 6690
not your mom's socks.
Liese that's awesome feedback. JZ, I owe you comments, I know. They are coming.
I've just been okayed to blog a little about the cover of an anthology coming out this summer - I am more than a bit excited about it.
Liese S. - Apr 09, 2013 5:35:02 pm PDT #5621 of 6690
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."
Thanks, y'all.
Ooh, Sox, that's awesome!
hippocampus - Apr 10, 2013 5:06:46 am PDT #5622 of 6690
not your mom's socks.
JZ, insent.
Amy - Apr 10, 2013 9:22:16 am PDT #5623 of 6690
Because books.
Hey, you're in that anthology! I didn't know that! (Did I?) Very cool! And that's a gorgeous cover.
Polter-Cow - Apr 10, 2013 9:31:30 am PDT #5624 of 6690
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
Oh, very cool, congratulations!