Wesley: All right. I'm going to let you all in on something you may have trouble comprehending. I assure you however-- Gunn: Vampires are real. Wesley: I was telling!

'The Cautionary Tale of Numero Cinco'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Amy - Jun 15, 2012 1:15:31 pm PDT #5322 of 6690
Because books.

I heard it's SEX-AY, too.


§ ita § - Jun 15, 2012 2:01:57 pm PDT #5323 of 6690
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Oh, man. I just checked the fanfic link on Wattpad, and it seems to be primarily het One Direction RPF. Which? Of course it exists. I just had no idea where it lived.


Ginger - Jun 28, 2012 3:33:26 pm PDT #5324 of 6690
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

A writer whines about freelancing: [link]


erikaj - Jun 28, 2012 6:06:08 pm PDT #5325 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!

Even his whines are better than mine. But I did make deadline while literally peeing once.


Holli - Jul 03, 2012 7:43:15 am PDT #5326 of 6690
an overblown libretto and a sumptuous score/ could never contain the contradictions I adore

I was wondering, is anyone here an SFWA member? I've just found out that I qualify-- apparently they added Daily Science Fiction as a qualifying market sometime since I last checked. So now I *can* join, but I'm not really clear on whether I *should*.


hippocampus - Jul 03, 2012 7:45:56 am PDT #5327 of 6690
not your mom's socks.

I am, Holli - insent.


§ ita § - Jul 03, 2012 8:45:57 am PDT #5328 of 6690
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Did anyone read the IO9 article on 20 Essential Tips on Rewriting Your Story Until it Shines?

Any good?


Typo Boy - Jul 03, 2012 11:50:02 am PDT #5329 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

You have to follow the link within the story to get to the actual article. I think most of the tips would work for most people. A few are very dependent on the particular writer thinking a particular way. My guess is that those would work for half and not for half. Even though they are tips for a fiction, I think they could be adapted for non-fiction too. Overall I approve. Don't know that you will like the article as well as I did, but my vote is "helpful if you exercise sense and skip the suggestions that won't work for you".


Connie Neil - Jul 03, 2012 1:26:47 pm PDT #5330 of 6690
brillig

OK, the guy who wrote the original article has been working on a manuscript for 8 years, and he's going to talk about how it's changed over that time? I've got stuff that's taken me that long, but that's indicative of psychological barriers to finishing the thing, not because it's needed that much revising. Of course he's going to change the manuscript, he's not the same writer he was 8 years ago, he's got a completely different way of telling a story.

Revising can go a little too long, I think.


Amy - Jul 03, 2012 1:46:35 pm PDT #5331 of 6690
Because books.

I don't know -- I'm only up to the ninth tip, and it's reading to me like someone who's petrified of actually finishing. So much of what he's suggesting isn't necessary at all -- or it's going to be determined by another reader, not post-its in columns.