Even his whines are better than mine. But I did make deadline while literally peeing once.

I was wondering, is anyone here an SFWA member? I've just found out that I qualify-- apparently they added Daily Science Fiction as a qualifying market sometime since I last checked. So now I *can* join, but I'm not really clear on whether I *should*.

I am, Holli - insent.

Did anyone read the IO9 article on 20 Essential Tips on Rewriting Your Story Until it Shines?

Any good?

You have to follow the link within the story to get to the actual article. I think most of the tips would work for most people. A few are very dependent on the particular writer thinking a particular way. My guess is that those would work for half and not for half. Even though they are tips for a fiction, I think they could be adapted for non-fiction too. Overall I approve. Don't know that you will like the article as well as I did, but my vote is "helpful if you exercise sense and skip the suggestions that won't work for you".

OK, the guy who wrote the original article has been working on a manuscript for 8 years, and he's going to talk about how it's changed over that time? I've got stuff that's taken me that long, but that's indicative of psychological barriers to finishing the thing, not because it's needed that much revising. Of course he's going to change the manuscript, he's not the same writer he was 8 years ago, he's got a completely different way of telling a story.

Revising can go a little too long, I think.

I don't know -- I'm only up to the ninth tip, and it's reading to me like someone who's petrified of actually finishing. So much of what he's suggesting isn't necessary at all -- or it's going to be determined by another reader, not post-its in columns.

I'm always leery of advice that talks about tracking the theme or finding out what the story's about. If you don't know all that before you finish the first draft, I'd be worried. Granted, expressing it all clearly can be tweaked, but I suspect some folks just love to revise.

edit: but fixing typos is always in fashion

I found that advice kind of...masturbatory. But it could be I don't pay enough attention to revisions. But after eight years, are you still sure that's, you know, The One?

I believe in Lawrence Bloch's advice about washing garbage. Sometimes you can revise all the interesting freshness of a work right out of it.