Cool! Now I just need to make it buyable.
Hey! What a surprise! Hostile 17! Can I get you a drink, Hostile 17?
Xander ,'Dirty Girls'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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Gudanov - Jan 26, 2011 8:31:46 am PST #3958 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
-t - Jan 26, 2011 12:01:43 pm PST #3959 of 6690
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration
Eeee, I got my erika issue of EQ! I like the bio, btw.
erikaj - Jan 26, 2011 3:39:16 pm PST #3960 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!
Great...I'm so glad.
Gudanov - Jan 27, 2011 5:59:20 am PST #3961 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
Okay, I have yet another version with bits and pieces taken from various places and with some different details highlighted than the first one. I hope I'm not driving y'all crazy.
Humanity teeters on the brink, hunted by demons and a savage race called the Fari. Mystical barriers protect the few cities left, but a mad priest threatens their survival when he reawakens the ancient power of the Dead Mountain to bring forth an apocalyptic battle.
Aimee Fallon, a sheltered creator of magical gadgets, discovers a mysterious artifact—the key to stopping the Mountain’s magic—and joins an expedition to destroy the power’s threat, but little is as it seems. Along the way, she is betrayed by those she trusts and finds herself abandoned in hostile Fari lands with a forbidden lover who suspects her of murdering his kin. Her only help is an assassin: a woman with a tongue as sharp as her knives who once nearly killed her. The cause seems lost, especially because Aimee doesn’t believe she has a heroic bone in her body. But fate isn’t consulting her.
THE DEAD MOUNTAIN is a fast-paced 120,000-word fantasy adventure mixed with romance and betrayal and a female hero who relies on her wits and determination rather than swords and spells.
Connie Neil - Jan 27, 2011 6:57:29 am PST #3962 of 6690
brillig
I like that, it focuses on the peril and the solution.
Gudanov - Jan 27, 2011 8:00:31 am PST #3963 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
Thanks.
Laga - Jan 27, 2011 8:33:16 am PST #3964 of 6690
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.
I like knowing who set the events in motion. And the assassin character is intriguing.
Seska (the Watcher-in-Training) - Jan 27, 2011 9:57:24 am PST #3965 of 6690
"We're all stories, in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?"
That's looking great, Gud.
hippocampus - Jan 27, 2011 2:29:39 pm PST #3966 of 6690
not your mom's socks.
Good stuff Gud!
Deena - Jan 27, 2011 4:08:16 pm PST #3967 of 6690
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
I love that. The only quibble I have (and should have said sooner) is "Humanity teeters on the brink"
Could you reword that so it's not a cliche? I can't actually think of a way, but I think it would be a good thing.