Sounds good to me, though I'm no expert in such things.
I'm still commuting through Twilight. I have to admit for a book that creates strong reactions both positive and negative, it sure is a disappointment. 16 chapters in and nothing really seems to have happened, characters don't develop, there's no real conflict, the only tension seems to be the male lead wants to eat (literally) the female lead but that's been beaten into the ground during their umpteen conversations that all sound the same.
There does seem to be a theme developing where I think the book is more clever than it actually is. At first I thought the male lead's perfection was because we're seeing him through the prism of the protagonist's obsession, but it's become apparent that he actually is perfect. At first I thought the protagonist's exaggerated clumsiness was probably her perception of herself rather that something real, but it appears to be literal. At first I thought when they talked about the protagonist attracting danger to herself that it was just jokey dialogue, but no attracting danger appears to be an actual supernatural power. Weird book.