Whew-- had a first cold read come back on the new proposal and they called it Twilight meets Time Traveler's Wife in the best of ways with a lovely fairy tale quality
I can live with those sorts of comparisons if it'll help sell the thing. *g*
Everything looks good from here... Yes. Yes, this is a fertile land, and we will thrive. We will rule over all this land, and we will call it... 'This Land.' I think we should call it 'your grave!' Ah, curse your sudden but inevitable betrayal! Ha ha HA! Mine is an evil laugh! Now die! Oh, no, God! Oh, dear God in heaven!
Wash ,'Serenity'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Barb - Jan 13, 2011 1:00:25 pm PST #3844 of 6739
“Not dead yet!”
Anne W. - Jan 13, 2011 1:00:52 pm PST #3845 of 6739
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
That's awesome, Barb!
Ginger - Jan 13, 2011 1:02:08 pm PST #3846 of 6739
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
If it means "sells like Twilight," it's the best description ever.
Gudanov - Jan 13, 2011 1:07:29 pm PST #3847 of 6739
Coding and Sleeping
Sounds encouraging.
SailAweigh - Jan 13, 2011 1:08:16 pm PST #3848 of 6739
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Yay, Barb! That sounds great!
Seska (the Watcher-in-Training) - Jan 13, 2011 9:05:08 pm PST #3849 of 6739
"We're all stories, in the end. Just make it a good one, eh?"
Wonderful-sounding review, Barb! Much proposal~ma for more reactions like that.
Congrats on finishing the main revisions, Gud! I hope the submission stage leads to great things.
Amy - Jan 14, 2011 6:08:05 am PST #3850 of 6739
Because books.
I finally wrangled the plot threads for my next book into submission. So ... now to write it. Yay?
Barb - Jan 14, 2011 6:27:22 am PST #3851 of 6739
“Not dead yet!”
Definite yay! (I can't wait to hear what the plot threads are...)
hippocampus - Jan 14, 2011 6:30:50 am PST #3852 of 6739
not your mom's socks.
Yay!
Gudanov - Jan 16, 2011 9:35:53 am PST #3853 of 6739
Coding and Sleeping
Synopizing is hard. Already, I feel like I've left so, so much out of my synopsis and it's still over five pages long.