Thanks Gud.

What is the protocol for Beta-ing? I mean of course expectations can be anything if mutually agreed, but is normal beta-ing one-read-and-comment? Or is normal beta-ing, beta, give feedback, and then beta the modified results?

I think it's pretty much whatever people are willing to do for you.

I'm up to chapter 23 on my last revision before grammar-mistake and weak-verb/adverb hunting.

Typo Boy, the discussion that started here was about group critique experiences, but I think the advice would apply to beta-reading just as well.

Yes. I guess then I'll just x-post from press. I'm looking for Beta readers for my new work in progress, first section to be reader for review by the middle of this month (Nov. 2010). I'm grateful for any level of feedback people are willing to give, but please let me know if you are willing to do multiple iterations. Profile addy is good.

I'll do some. Of course, you already know I'm not a scientific genius and will be following you around like Columbo asking about "One more thing," Except I won't be faking...I really am that ignorant.

I'd like to help, but I'm swamped this month and I already have a backlog of beta reading.

I've reached the half-way point of my current revision. This is the revision where I'm evaluating the comments from people who've read it. After this revision, it'll just a sweep to fix errors and writing the synopsis.

Ideas are starting to snap into place for my next novel, The Shore of Night. It starts before the events in 'Discipline' (Still up on my website, password: foamy) where I establish the common people of Lexi's home aren't so bad even if they have some draconian rules that the leaders ruthlessly enforce. Lexi will probably get strengthened up a bit and the reader will get to see her father and the contempt he holds for his bastard daughter.

Then it moves into 'Discipline' were she's in exile and meets up with the eccentric Old Tom and his flying machine and then Devon and his crew. It won't be all the same as the short story but similar. She still murders Devon at the end.

Lexi has to figure out how to navigate back to the night-side civilization. I have some ideas about that.

Then she meets the night side of the planet. The place Devon is from is the most sun-wise of the night towns. It's a mining town, extracting coal for the power hungry night-side settlements. It's a company town, workers are paid in company currency, the government is bought and paid for by the company, and whole thing is run by Devon's father. It turns out that he's trying to collect the old advanced technology from the past to both suppress and exploit.

As she learns the situation, Lexi decides on a plan of action to thwart Devon's father, but every goes wrong. A friend betrays her (not in malice), her plan is destroyed, Lexi is arrested, Devon's father finds out what happened to his son and he comes into possession of the notes of the eccentric man that Lexi met way back in the beginning. The notes detail information of the day-side people and Devon's father is coming into the technology to travel there and exploit the mostly defenseless daysiders.

Lexi has to start a movement to rise up against the powers that be and overthrow Devon's father, the nasty native life and ecosystem will play a role in this, but not in a taking sides sort of way, more in a Lexi cleverly taking advantage of it. The ending will probably feature Lexi deciding to return to her home to change things there as well. The development of Lexi from naive and somewhat primitive to a leader is at the core of the story though there is a bit of socio-economic commentary as well.

No sex or graphic violence to make it possible to be YA. A prostitute might play a role, but I think that would be okay with the lack of actual sex.

Or course, I still need to finish the first novel, but I'm starting to get itchy about starting the next.