Writing is easy; all you do is sit staring at a blank sheet of paper until the drops of blood form on your forehead. - Gene Fowler
Right. Sir. Honey.
Zoe ,'The Train Job'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Ginger - Aug 31, 2009 10:51:33 am PDT #2077 of 6690
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
Allyson - Aug 31, 2009 11:00:36 am PDT #2078 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Is there anyone out there who can do a bit of a beta read for me tonight? I mean, not read the whole thing, but accept it and maybe get back to me in a week or so?
erikaj - Aug 31, 2009 11:02:57 am PDT #2079 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!
okay, I will. I haven't read it though...will that help,or hurt?
Burrell - Aug 31, 2009 11:13:49 am PDT #2080 of 6690
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
I can give it a read, Allyson. I don't have grading right now.
Allyson - Aug 31, 2009 11:21:17 am PDT #2081 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
That would be awesome. I just got my little guy to France, have to clean up France a little bit, and then write him to Australia and the San Diego zoo. The last chapter will need some cleanup. Moving along, moving along. Another 6k words or so.
THIS IS INSANE!
Burrell - Aug 31, 2009 11:33:28 am PDT #2082 of 6690
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
Not insane! It's great.
Gudanov - Aug 31, 2009 3:29:28 pm PDT #2083 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
I can take a look at it. I can't get to tonight, tonight, but during the week. Profile addy is good.
Like erika, I haven't seen the rest. Also, my writing skills are dubious but I'm not afraid of giving my opinions.
I finally burst out of the revised chapter 12 logjam, despite recovering from some minor surgery. Also, I downed chapter 13 which yay, didn't change a lot from the rough draft. I'm now working on revising 14 in which romance rears its scary head.
Allyson - Aug 31, 2009 3:42:43 pm PDT #2084 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
I don't think I'm gonna make it. Chipping away at France. Desperation is kicking in.
Laura - Aug 31, 2009 4:17:09 pm PDT #2085 of 6690
Our wings are not tired.
Viva La France! You'll make it. We'll keep kicking you in the butt until you do.
Gudanov - Aug 31, 2009 4:46:20 pm PDT #2086 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
You can do it Allyson. Go kick France's butt!