Don't you just love this party? Everything's so fancy, and there's some kind of hot cheese over there.

Kaylee ,'Shindig'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Gudanov - Aug 31, 2009 3:29:28 pm PDT #2083 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I can take a look at it. I can't get to tonight, tonight, but during the week. Profile addy is good.

Like erika, I haven't seen the rest. Also, my writing skills are dubious but I'm not afraid of giving my opinions.

I finally burst out of the revised chapter 12 logjam, despite recovering from some minor surgery. Also, I downed chapter 13 which yay, didn't change a lot from the rough draft. I'm now working on revising 14 in which romance rears its scary head.


Allyson - Aug 31, 2009 3:42:43 pm PDT #2084 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

I don't think I'm gonna make it. Chipping away at France. Desperation is kicking in.


Laura - Aug 31, 2009 4:17:09 pm PDT #2085 of 6690
Our wings are not tired.

Viva La France! You'll make it. We'll keep kicking you in the butt until you do.


Gudanov - Aug 31, 2009 4:46:20 pm PDT #2086 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

You can do it Allyson. Go kick France's butt!


Ginger - Aug 31, 2009 5:23:34 pm PDT #2087 of 6690
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

If you need another set of eyes, I should be able to look at it this week, Allyson. Profile addy is good.


Beverly - Aug 31, 2009 5:52:07 pm PDT #2088 of 6690
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Allyson, send it. If you need another reader, I'll be glad to take a look.

Gud, on your stuff tomorrow.

Um. Complete sentences may return eventually.


Allyson - Aug 31, 2009 6:04:19 pm PDT #2089 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Bless, all.

Still working. Getting there.


Atropa - Aug 31, 2009 8:38:25 pm PDT #2090 of 6690
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

runs into thread clutching a glass of absinthe

Why oh why did I decide to make that story for Steampunk Tales a serial? WHYYYYYY? How the hell am I going to write the next section? MY DEADLINE IS IN THREE DAYS. I am half-convinced that writing the first part was a lucky fluke. I spent all day re-reading the first installment I wrote, then staring at a blank document. I finally started getting words tonight, and have just sent the first 1K words off to my sanity check people, because I have no idea if it's any good. WHY DID I DO THIS TO MYSELF?

AND I need to write a proposal and polish the sample chapter for the YA book/series I want to do, because my agent wants to see it. Ohgodohgod. Why am I so scared of writing fiction?

t the whinycakes writer tag never closes, sorry


Gudanov - Sep 01, 2009 6:55:15 am PDT #2091 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Deep breaths. You'll do great.

At chapter 14, I've realized my revised version is on track for something like 70-80 chapters. Is that an insane number? On the positive side I try to end each chapter on a hook of some sort so I'll end up with a lot of hooks.


Connie Neil - Sep 01, 2009 7:31:31 am PDT #2092 of 6690
brillig

How long are your chapters?