okay, I will. I haven't read it though...will that help,or hurt?
Oh, look at the pretties!
Kaylee ,'Shindig'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
erikaj - Aug 31, 2009 11:02:57 am PDT #2079 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!
Burrell - Aug 31, 2009 11:13:49 am PDT #2080 of 6690
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
I can give it a read, Allyson. I don't have grading right now.
Allyson - Aug 31, 2009 11:21:17 am PDT #2081 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
That would be awesome. I just got my little guy to France, have to clean up France a little bit, and then write him to Australia and the San Diego zoo. The last chapter will need some cleanup. Moving along, moving along. Another 6k words or so.
THIS IS INSANE!
Burrell - Aug 31, 2009 11:33:28 am PDT #2082 of 6690
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
Not insane! It's great.
Gudanov - Aug 31, 2009 3:29:28 pm PDT #2083 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
I can take a look at it. I can't get to tonight, tonight, but during the week. Profile addy is good.
Like erika, I haven't seen the rest. Also, my writing skills are dubious but I'm not afraid of giving my opinions.
I finally burst out of the revised chapter 12 logjam, despite recovering from some minor surgery. Also, I downed chapter 13 which yay, didn't change a lot from the rough draft. I'm now working on revising 14 in which romance rears its scary head.
Allyson - Aug 31, 2009 3:42:43 pm PDT #2084 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
I don't think I'm gonna make it. Chipping away at France. Desperation is kicking in.
Laura - Aug 31, 2009 4:17:09 pm PDT #2085 of 6690
Our wings are not tired.
Viva La France! You'll make it. We'll keep kicking you in the butt until you do.
Gudanov - Aug 31, 2009 4:46:20 pm PDT #2086 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
You can do it Allyson. Go kick France's butt!
Ginger - Aug 31, 2009 5:23:34 pm PDT #2087 of 6690
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
If you need another set of eyes, I should be able to look at it this week, Allyson. Profile addy is good.
Beverly - Aug 31, 2009 5:52:07 pm PDT #2088 of 6690
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Allyson, send it. If you need another reader, I'll be glad to take a look.
Gud, on your stuff tomorrow.
Um. Complete sentences may return eventually.