Tracy: Well-- That call -- That call means you just murdered me. Mal: No, son. You murdered yourself. I just carried the bullet a while.

'The Message'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Barb - Jul 27, 2009 8:05:41 pm PDT #1897 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”

Ooph, Gud. Those are always problematic. Because spell check won't catch those.

ImememeN, I am DONE.

The last 35 pages took longer than I expected, but I was being very careful to make sure all the loose ends and references were tied together, nothing left hanging. Best part, though, is when you read through and you realize those threads all pulled themselves together, seemingly without much effort on your part.

The Girls in the Basement, hard at work.

I'll let it rest a bit and maybe skim some specific bits tomorrow, then Wednesday morning, off it goes to Madame Agent.


-t - Jul 27, 2009 8:07:29 pm PDT #1898 of 6690
I am a woman of various inclinations and only some of the time are they to burn everything down in frustration

All right, Barb! Woo!


Beverly - Jul 28, 2009 12:54:49 am PDT #1899 of 6690
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Go Barb! Ehhhxcellent!

Gud, it will be tomorrow before I can have a look. (looks at clock) Well, later today.


Gudanov - Jul 28, 2009 3:34:14 am PDT #1900 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Excellent Barb!

No problem Beverly, I just thank you for taking a look.


Barb - Jul 28, 2009 3:40:43 am PDT #1901 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”

Oooph. Sooooo tired. I was exhausted when I finished last night after 1AM, but I just couldn't settle down. Mind was racing entirely too hard and fast. So up again at 6:45.

I'll probably give the last two chapters a final looksee and then send, just to get the bastard off my desk.


Gudanov - Jul 28, 2009 4:55:41 am PDT #1902 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Glad to hear it's leaving your desk. That has to feel good.

I'm very close to being done with revised chapter 4. It's another short chapter but not out of line with chapter size in the revision. It was a such a perfect place to break though and it's right before a change in POV. Chapter 5 will be all brand spanking new stuff, but it will be pretty short.


Gudanov - Jul 28, 2009 5:16:05 am PDT #1903 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I'm thinking after generating new stuff for chapter 5, I may go back to chapter 1 to make a few changes based on comments I've received. I've already made a few.


erikaj - Jul 28, 2009 8:38:11 am PDT #1904 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!

SCRIPT TIP THAT'S NOT IN A BOOK Don't read Nick Hornby and write "Entourage" at the same time. While it makes for a nice tour of The Male Experience, you'll find yourself wondering when Johnny Drama got a "mobile" pretty fast.


Gudanov - Jul 29, 2009 5:18:38 am PDT #1905 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

Chapter 4 first revision is done. I also went back and added more revisions to chapter 1. I'm thinking of posting the evolution of chapter 1 on my blog. I think that could be kind of interesting. There are at least 4 versions so far that I could post up there.

Tonight, more chapter 5 I think. I have a couple of paragraphs, but that's it so far. Hopefully, it will be the last all new chapter for a bit.


Gudanov - Jul 30, 2009 4:51:16 am PDT #1906 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I worked on my blog for awhile and finally really got going on chapter 5. Chapter 5 is all brand new so it is the first time I've written something brand new since I've done some revision. Chapter 1 was all new, but I hadn't revised anything yet when I wrote it. I think my initial writing has improved quite a bit as a result of having done some revision.