Anya: Are you stupid or something? Giles: Allow me to answer that question with a firing.

'Sleeper'


The Minearverse 6: Fiery Thread of Death

[NAFDA] "There will be an occasional happy, so that it might be crushed under the boot of the writer." From Zorro to Angel (including Wonderfalls, The Inside and Drive), this is where Buffistas come to anoint themselves in the bloodbath. Oh, and help us get Terriers dvds!


Steph L. - Feb 14, 2009 7:47:59 am PST #1641 of 4535
I look more rad than Lutheranism

people who tie each other up for sex don't have league regulations, etc. (And therefore no cool jerseys and TV broadcasts on Sunday afternoons.)

Alas! Because I'd totally buy one of those jerseys,

Well, we *do* have t-shirts (at a recent event I went to, there was one I wanted to buy for Jilli that said "Don't worry, it's not MY blood"), but sadly, no league shirts.

and I think that the commentators would be comedy gold.

Heh. Given some of the parties I've been to, you're so NOT wrong.


Polter-Cow - Feb 14, 2009 7:48:45 am PST #1642 of 4535
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

what the consequences are.

I really liked the opening scene, by the by.

"Actions have consequences."
"What if they didn't?"


Fay - Feb 14, 2009 7:49:16 am PST #1643 of 4535
"Fuck Western ideologically-motivated gender identification!" Sulu gasped, and came.

Heh. Given some of the parties I've been to, you're so NOT wrong.

Bwah!


Polter-Cow - Feb 14, 2009 8:03:20 am PST #1644 of 4535
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

What I didn't get from the premise and the promos was the amount of free will the Actives have. While I knew the entered the program somewhat willingly, I had also thought they submitted themselves to the mindwipes willingly as part of the agreement. But that's not the case. There appears to be an implanted suggestion that they come back for "treatment," but they have no idea they're about to essentially kill their selves.


Allyson - Feb 14, 2009 9:29:37 am PST #1645 of 4535
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

We gave up nineteen minutes in. It seemed weirdly sloppy to me, as if he went into it figuring that the only audience who would watch were people who already knew the premise and his history with other shows.

It seems like a fantastic premise for a porno movie with high production values, like Pirates.

However, it did make me really nostalgic for Buffy and Angel, so I could remember that these people? Are capable of writing/acting/directing the shit out of an episode of television.

When i look at the set-ups of Lie to Me and Leverage, they were so pitch perfect at introducing a cast and a premise. That's how it's done. This? Total mess. Throwing as much shit at the wall to see what sticks. It's frustrating.

I mean, Buffy was exploited heavily, by her watcher, by the Watcher's Council, and we saw this wonderful journey of a young woman becoming self-aware. That was pretty fucking awesome.

This is just porn. Straight up.


Sparky1 - Feb 14, 2009 9:50:05 am PST #1646 of 4535
Librarian Warlord

I wasn't too thrilled with "the new moon has made her a virgin again", or whatever that line was. Mindwipe does not equal sexual purity.

It's from Tennesee Williams' play Camino Real, the prostitute character Esmeralda says, "I never remember what happened before the moonrise makes me a virgin."

At least, I hope that's what Joss had in mind.


Kevin - Feb 14, 2009 10:06:43 am PST #1647 of 4535
Never fall in love with somebody you actually love.

Sparky, I think he's commented on that somewhere (to confirm).

The ratings aren't actually that bad, looking at it. They won the key demos they wanted. Also, it doubled it's female viewership over Terminator.

Allyson, the pitch of Dollhouse is a young woman becoming self aware and fighting those who put her in that position. Well, that's the idea.


Typo Boy - Feb 14, 2009 10:15:00 am PST #1648 of 4535
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

I don't think it is straight porn, but it is disappointing. The writing so far seems mediocre at best, and even omitting the promos, the gender issues are huge. (Don't think you can blame the show for the promo's; showrunner does not control those.)

Every now and then an op-ed columnist or a blogger will start a piece "this will make a lot of people angry". And then get very indignant when a lot of people do in fact get angry. "Gee I said that punching you in the snout might make you angry. So aren't you the silly over-reactor for actually getting mad when I actually punch you in the snout."

The same thing with the gender issues in this. The fact that Joss anticipated that people would notice his weird gender issues does not make them disappear. The framing of this show lets him write about human trafficking mainly from the point of view of the traffickers, and from trafficked people who (thanks to brain washing) don't actually object.

The fact that the show understands on some level that this is problematic, that some of the human traffickers have a troubled conscience does not really deal with the problem.

I can't think of many really satisfactory ways to deal with this. Maybe classic victim revenge horror fantasy where all the dolls realize what is going on, kill all people running the dollhouse (including their handlers) and use the computer files to track down the owners and all the customers and kill them.

Now I'm not saying my suggestion is particularly good writing. I'm not a long form fiction writer. But this is squicky at a visceral level, and to me it could only be justified by an equally visceral response. And so far I don't see the premise as particularly well written either.


Steph L. - Feb 14, 2009 10:18:14 am PST #1649 of 4535
I look more rad than Lutheranism

While I knew the entered the program somewhat willingly, I had also thought they submitted themselves to the mindwipes willingly as part of the agreement. But that's not the case. There appears to be an implanted suggestion that they come back for "treatment," but they have no idea they're about to essentially kill their selves.

P-C, can you elaborate? I don't get this. It seemed pretty clear that when the Actives sign up, they know they're going to be mindwiped. The imprinted personalities don't know they're going to be zapped away, but that's not the same thing.

Allyson, the pitch of Dollhouse is a young woman becoming self aware and fighting those who put her in that position. Well, that's the idea.

Doesn't matter what the pitch is if it doesn't come off that way.


§ ita § - Feb 14, 2009 10:19:07 am PST #1650 of 4535
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Hmm. I think Dollhouse did a better job of "these are my people, this is my vibe" than Lie To Me, whose pilot I found a vague mess, and which I pretty much only keep watching because of its lead.

Dollhouse has more of a personality, and had teasers decently placed for future intrigue.

The make or break for me will be the nature of the missions. They could easily turn too icky for me.