Thank you!
'Serenity'
Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
Here's the rest of the story so far:
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Oz and Amy feel back.
Something not right with this - the tense? It's present tense, and it's a bit unclear. They feel/felt whose back?
Ah. "Oz and Amy fell back."
Fixed. Also fixed the numbering, as it had gotten off. Hopefully it's all followable now.
Thanks Victor!
Thanks Victor!
No prob. Hope you enjoy,
Victor, I am loving it!!!
Victor, I am loving it!!!
Gracias. For awhile there, I was afraid I was boring people to tears.
For awhile there, I was afraid I was boring people to tears.
Not much chance of that. I am really glad you decided to continue this story. I'm really enjoying it.
No...it's interesting!