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Sir? I think you have a problem with your brain being missing.

Zoe ,'The Train Job'

Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.

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victor infante - Oct 26, 2004 5:56:13 am PDT #9708 of 10001

To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Here's the rest of the story so far:

deborah grabien - Oct 26, 2004 6:06:23 am PDT #9709 of 10001

It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oz and Amy feel back.

Something not right with this - the tense? It's present tense, and it's a bit unclear. They feel/felt whose back?

victor infante - Oct 26, 2004 6:14:44 am PDT #9710 of 10001

To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Ah. "Oz and Amy fell back."

Fixed. Also fixed the numbering, as it had gotten off. Hopefully it's all followable now.

sumi - Oct 26, 2004 6:14:48 am PDT #9711 of 10001

Art Crawl!!!

Thanks Victor!

victor infante - Oct 26, 2004 6:15:20 am PDT #9712 of 10001

To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Thanks Victor!

No prob. Hope you enjoy,

lisah - Oct 26, 2004 7:00:43 am PDT #9713 of 10001

Punishingly Intricate

Victor, I am loving it!!!

victor infante - Oct 26, 2004 7:02:38 am PDT #9714 of 10001

To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Victor, I am loving it!!!

Gracias. For awhile there, I was afraid I was boring people to tears.

sj - Oct 26, 2004 7:55:35 am PDT #9715 of 10001

"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

For awhile there, I was afraid I was boring people to tears.

Not much chance of that. I am really glad you decided to continue this story. I'm really enjoying it.

erikaj - Oct 26, 2004 9:01:14 am PDT #9716 of 10001

Always Anti-fascist!

No...it's interesting!

sumi - Oct 26, 2004 9:07:02 am PDT #9717 of 10001

Art Crawl!!!

I really want to read the whole story!

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