Mal: That's not what I saw. You like to tell me what really happened? Book: I surely would. And maybe someday I will.

'Safe'


Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies  

Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.


erikaj - Jan 22, 2004 9:11:08 am PST #8318 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

"Oh, Tim,” Emma said. “I knew you’d be here, trying to rescue someone. I love that you’re a hero. You can be an even bigger hero if you tell about the ritual.” And he lost himself in her kiss.
“ I can’t.”
Angelus slapped Tim . Tim noticed the bonds that were now around his limbs. He assumed it was one of Emma’s little fetishes but then the pain started. Angelus asked for Spike’s lighter and burned Bayliss’ wrist, Emma murmuring consoling phrases all the while. He noted with some shame that arousal was starting to push past the pain and it brought tears to his eyes.
“No, no, I really can’t. I don’t know anything...we planned that specifically. Mr. Giles thought it would be safer.”

“People like you and me don’t care about being safe, Tim.” Emma said, with that glint in her eye. “Tell me.”

“I don’t know...I’m telling you.”

“Can you swear on Adena Watson’s life?” Emma asked as Tim heard the sickening pop of his own finger being dislocated.

”Yes,” he said, dully. “I swear. On Adena’s memory. Then the dizzying mixture of pleasure and pain as they kissed again. Maybe it could all be a dream, that thing with the clerk and the eleven cents...his trying to fend off Emma’s boyfriend, some kind of temporary insanity. Bayliss and Zoole, together again.

“That will be quite enough, Drusilla.”

"My turn...they didn’t have chainsaws when I tortured last.”

”Oh, Christ. Not the chainsaw line again. Ok, first time it was menacing, I’ll give you that. But repeating it’s just sad. Bloody derivative, mate.” Angelus gave his rival a look. "What? I was a poet once...I've learned a little something about language, right?" Tim, on looking into the demon face of the woman he'd been kissing, lost consciousness.


erikaj - Jan 22, 2004 9:29:28 am PST #8319 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Who should say "Then why would they make you see me?" Pembleton or Munch? I can't decide...


deborah grabien - Jan 22, 2004 5:15:51 pm PST #8320 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Pembleton.

Only one word in the last piece that rang wrong: slapping cruelly. I think the "cruelly" isn't needed, do you? We know our Angelus....


erikaj - Jan 22, 2004 5:44:11 pm PST #8321 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

That's true... and it wasn't really the right word anyway. Pembleton was my first choice...the first answer is always the one you should go with, isn't it?


DCJensen - Jan 22, 2004 6:26:55 pm PST #8322 of 10001
All is well that ends in pizza.

Has anyone heard the term "CanonSue" to describe the sort of MarySue that is the representation of the author?


erikaj - Jan 22, 2004 6:28:54 pm PST #8323 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

What? Like an avatar?


DCJensen - Jan 22, 2004 6:32:10 pm PST #8324 of 10001
All is well that ends in pizza.

No, a character.


erikaj - Jan 22, 2004 6:33:50 pm PST #8325 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Oh, I thought that's what that meant? Is it not?


deborah grabien - Jan 22, 2004 6:34:46 pm PST #8326 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

That's an odd term, isn't it? Because I always though5t the Mary Sue thing was the perfect superhero I-Can-Do-Anything character.

Whereas a CanonSue, under that description (representation of the author), could be flawed, fascinating, you name it.


DCJensen - Jan 22, 2004 6:39:21 pm PST #8327 of 10001
All is well that ends in pizza.

it's just that up until now, Mary Sue has covered both, generally, depending upon the fandom.