Thank you thank you thank you!

And, again pardon the neediness and ignorance, but will there be a link to where it's archived?

Yes indeed. Dana's putting it up and it will be linked, I assume right here.

edit: Oh, BTW, you do know there's a FranknTim getting Angelus in the Box story, right? (enabler)

Yay!!! Some good reading coming up for me! Plus more Homicide dvd watching on tap for tonight. I am blessed.

I know, lisah! Poor Tim...he keeps her photo on his desk. Sniff.(That actor is just amazing at being pained. Which before that, never really counted as a skill, imo, but damn.)And FrankenTim has made me very picky about interrogation scenes in other places. Spoiled me rotten. "If you cry, you die." So far, my links are like my algebra equations...I miss one tiny step, can't find it and it isn't right. I swear it looks like what Deena or ita writes as I'm doing it, then what happens? Wow, so many compliments. Thanks, everyone.(And I never gave a thought to archiving because it was supposed to be a silly fluffy thing for Deb(and me, in my bunk.) I thought of it as a thank you for the deathbombs. It took on a life of its own.

erika. "Defender of the Faith", right? I'm titling it, then sending you the word doc to check over and tell me what you want added, then sending to Dana.

Yep. Thanks again...it was your " Thunk" that put my fevered brain on this path. I might have had to...suffer with these images alone, otherwise.Go ahead and send to my profile...earthlink is not cooperating attachment-wise for some mysterious reason. Maybe John Wilkes Booth had a hand in it.

Will send in about two minutes. One question, before I save - I've cleaned up the formatting and line spacing, and changed the *insert* to italics. Would you like a clear separation between the sections (I use line space, * * * and then another line space on mine)?

Thanks. That would be fine. This is a rite of passage, isn't it. A year and a half from "Why would anyone want to do that?" to peddling smut of my very own. Buffistahood. It...changes people.

Erika, I confess. I stole my tag from you.

erika - question numero dos. I'm doing a final pass on it, and found a paragraph where the POV changes. Can I change one "he" to "Munch", to show who is doing the talking? it's here:

"Kay, if you need to talk about it...I'm here for you." No way. Sunnydale's answer to Phil Donahue was not going to support Kay out of her panties, like the beautiful and glamorous but obviously extremely needy Faith. Still, she was nubile...or did somebody with that kind of practice at kissing no longer fit "nubile"? He wasn't sure.

I'd like to change that final "he" to "Munch wasn't sure. Because his POV goes on into the next bit:

"Thanks, Tim, but I'm OK. It's just a..rude awakening, that's all. You know, you start out as one person, then you turn around one day, and you're somebody else." That's my girl, Munch thought. Resist Heathcliff.