It has far too many things in common with mine for comfort. I actually like "Her cycle wasn't exactly thrilled with the whole returning-from-the-grave bit." Scary.

That's why you need the duelling babies thing, Am-Chau. Spike and Angel doing proud daddy glares at each other. Ooh, and Buffy saying "You're not even his mother, how do you rate!" to Cordy.

connie, you are right. And possibly evil for making me do this. But I like you for it.

I live to make other people write weird fic. That means it's not just me tormented by "I bet it would be cool if I made them do this."

I, too, practically live for the weird fic. I'm so glad to have found a place where I'm not the only one who thinks about Gollum/Dobby, etc.

RL, my only criticism of that section - which is beautifully written - is that it feels to me much more like Willow trying to describe a dream after she wakes up than it does like Willow experiencing a dream. Though now that I think of it maybe that was the intent and I didn't catch it at the beginning.

Nope, this is supposed to be in-dream narration. I'll take that to consideration the next time I work it over.

And thanks.

Connie- or whoever- I'm stuck. I've got to the point where if I go on, I'll have to deal with the bit where Angel has to give Buffy and Spike a room with a double bed in, and then it's all angsty and no longer funny. Go or not go?

Do you want to go angsty? Don't write it if you don't want, but the best comedies always have a little bite in them. Much like life.

Advice given, Am-Chau.

edit: and now to the Bitches to put that in the right thread.