RL, my only criticism of that section - which is beautifully written - is that it feels to me much more like Willow trying to describe a dream after she wakes up than it does like Willow experiencing a dream. Though now that I think of it maybe that was the intent and I didn't catch it at the beginning.
Giles, if you would like to get by in American society, then you are going to have to follow our traditions. You're the patriarch. You have to host the festivities, or it's all meaningless.
Buffy ,'Sleeper'
Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
Katie M - Dec 04, 2002 1:29:47 pm PST #518 of 10001
I was charmed (albeit somewhat perplexed) by the fannish sensibility of many of the music choices -- it's like the director was trying to vid Canada. --loligo on the Olympic Opening Ceremonies
Rebecca Lizard - Dec 04, 2002 7:42:31 pm PST #519 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket
Nope, this is supposed to be in-dream narration. I'll take that to consideration the next time I work it over.
And thanks.
Am-Chau Yarkona - Dec 06, 2002 3:44:18 am PST #520 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
Connie- or whoever- I'm stuck. I've got to the point where if I go on, I'll have to deal with the bit where Angel has to give Buffy and Spike a room with a double bed in, and then it's all angsty and no longer funny. Go or not go?
Connie Neil - Dec 06, 2002 10:54:39 am PST #521 of 10001
brillig
Do you want to go angsty? Don't write it if you don't want, but the best comedies always have a little bite in them. Much like life.
Connie Neil - Dec 06, 2002 10:54:56 am PST #522 of 10001
brillig
Advice given, Am-Chau.
edit: and now to the Bitches to put that in the right thread.
Am-Chau Yarkona - Dec 06, 2002 10:55:35 am PST #523 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
Thanks. I'll try, and see if I can get out of it again.
P.M. Marc - Dec 06, 2002 10:59:37 am PST #524 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Oh, and the best angst normally has a little bit of comedy to it!
Just, you know, for what it's worth.
Am-Chau Yarkona - Dec 06, 2002 12:26:00 pm PST #525 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
So noted, Plei. Angst + comedy = better angst, comedy + angst = better comedy.
P.M. Marc - Dec 07, 2002 11:53:49 am PST #526 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Slash Advent Spike/Xander is up
Part of my insane "oh, sure, I'll see what all I can produce on demand in December" thing.
They don't have anchor tags there, so you have to scroll 3/4 of the way down the page, or just search the page for the words "Fringe Benefits". S7 spoilery.
Michele T. - Dec 07, 2002 11:59:30 am PST #527 of 10001
with a gleam in my eye, and an almost airtight alibi
Heh. Cute. Though the person who designed the page must be shot.