RL, my only criticism of that section - which is beautifully written - is that it feels to me much more like Willow trying to describe a dream after she wakes up than it does like Willow experiencing a dream. Though now that I think of it maybe that was the intent and I didn't catch it at the beginning.
I tell you I have this theory. It goes where, you're the one who's not my sister. Cuz mom adopted you from a shoe box full of baby howler monkeys, and never told you cuz it could hurt your delicate baby feelings.
Dawn ,'Selfless'
Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
Katie M - Dec 04, 2002 1:29:47 pm PST #518 of 10001
I was charmed (albeit somewhat perplexed) by the fannish sensibility of many of the music choices -- it's like the director was trying to vid Canada. --loligo on the Olympic Opening Ceremonies
Rebecca Lizard - Dec 04, 2002 7:42:31 pm PST #519 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket
Nope, this is supposed to be in-dream narration. I'll take that to consideration the next time I work it over.
And thanks.
Am-Chau Yarkona - Dec 06, 2002 3:44:18 am PST #520 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
Connie- or whoever- I'm stuck. I've got to the point where if I go on, I'll have to deal with the bit where Angel has to give Buffy and Spike a room with a double bed in, and then it's all angsty and no longer funny. Go or not go?
Connie Neil - Dec 06, 2002 10:54:39 am PST #521 of 10001
brillig
Do you want to go angsty? Don't write it if you don't want, but the best comedies always have a little bite in them. Much like life.
Connie Neil - Dec 06, 2002 10:54:56 am PST #522 of 10001
brillig
Advice given, Am-Chau.
edit: and now to the Bitches to put that in the right thread.
Am-Chau Yarkona - Dec 06, 2002 10:55:35 am PST #523 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
Thanks. I'll try, and see if I can get out of it again.
P.M. Marc - Dec 06, 2002 10:59:37 am PST #524 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Oh, and the best angst normally has a little bit of comedy to it!
Just, you know, for what it's worth.
Am-Chau Yarkona - Dec 06, 2002 12:26:00 pm PST #525 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
So noted, Plei. Angst + comedy = better angst, comedy + angst = better comedy.
P.M. Marc - Dec 07, 2002 11:53:49 am PST #526 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Slash Advent Spike/Xander is up
Part of my insane "oh, sure, I'll see what all I can produce on demand in December" thing.
They don't have anchor tags there, so you have to scroll 3/4 of the way down the page, or just search the page for the words "Fringe Benefits". S7 spoilery.
Michele T. - Dec 07, 2002 11:59:30 am PST #527 of 10001
with a gleam in my eye, and an almost airtight alibi
Heh. Cute. Though the person who designed the page must be shot.