Ewwwwwwwww. Well written, as Deena pointed out, but still Ewwwwwwww.
Fire bad. Tree pretty.
Buffy ,'Chosen'
Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
Lee - Jul 05, 2003 3:38:24 pm PDT #4837 of 10001
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.
victor infante - Jul 05, 2003 3:39:09 pm PDT #4838 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
There's no point, no insight, just ick.
"Ick" about sums it up.
Plei, I love you. You are a wonderful, talented writer.
Don't ever do that again.
Please.
P.M. Marc - Jul 05, 2003 3:40:44 pm PDT #4839 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
I'll probably never post it again, though I will probably write such stuff to get s.a. off her ass and writing when she's told me to do so.
Deena - Jul 05, 2003 3:41:17 pm PDT #4840 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
Maybe because it's you, but I liked bits of it, the red anger, the mention of the books, the desire for more magic, the unwillingness to forgive Buffy. Yeah, it's exploitation, and I really hated it with a sick to my stomach nausea type hatred, but there are bits that are worthwhile. I think that's the you and the well-written part.
edit: I said too much, didn't I? I think you should write and post anything you want to write and post. Though, next time you say badfic, I'll probably give it a pass.
What is it about this that would make S.A. get writing?
Fay - Jul 05, 2003 3:43:49 pm PDT #4841 of 10001
"Fuck Western ideologically-motivated gender identification!" Sulu gasped, and came.
skips several hundred posts.
What. Victor. Said.
Lee - Jul 05, 2003 3:44:42 pm PDT #4842 of 10001
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.
Don't ever do that again. Please.
I've got to go with Victor on this one. Even tubby man love would be better.
Elena - Jul 05, 2003 4:07:09 pm PDT #4843 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.
See, to me badfic usually means bad writing - either bad spelling, punctuation, syntax, grammar, or bad characterisation, weak plot, cliched writing. And this wasn't that. This is another level of fic - it's like a snuff film with really nice sets and costumes.
P.M. Marc - Jul 05, 2003 4:11:51 pm PDT #4844 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
And this wasn't that. This is another level of fic - it's like a snuff film with really nice sets and costumes.
Oh my.
Elena - Jul 05, 2003 4:13:55 pm PDT #4845 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.
No offense intended... I want to say that I mean that in a good way - but, really, there's no good about it, is there.... I think it was well written, it was in character, it was plausible. And, really, that makes it hard to dismiss or ignore.
Deena - Jul 05, 2003 4:18:25 pm PDT #4846 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
what she said.