Mal: You are very much lacking in imagination. Zoe: I imagine that's so, sir.

'Out Of Gas'


Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies  

Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.


kat perez - Jul 02, 2003 8:49:30 am PDT #4744 of 10001
"We have trust issues." Mylar

Victor, I am loving this. More, please.


victor infante - Jul 02, 2003 8:51:44 am PDT #4745 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Victor, this is getting way interesting, bro.

Thanks. I hope it's not too dragged-out to follow. I'm trying to keep a lot of balls in the air, here. Please let me know if it does.


P.M. Marc - Jul 02, 2003 8:52:40 am PDT #4746 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

No dragging yet.

Gonna have to set up a Victor shrine.


sj - Jul 02, 2003 8:58:44 am PDT #4747 of 10001
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

It is not dragging at all.


victor infante - Jul 02, 2003 9:03:08 am PDT #4748 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

No dragging yet.

Oh, good. Because I think I may be a bit past halfway through.


deborah grabien - Jul 02, 2003 9:15:27 am PDT #4749 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Aint no drag nowhere, nohow, contrariwise. (Lewis Carroll moment)


Am-Chau Yarkona - Jul 02, 2003 9:37:44 am PDT #4750 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty

No dragging. Much leaping and dancing with joy over here. (I love this thread; between Plei and Victor, it's given me much joy today.)

Also much nit-picking of typos:

“You didn’t strike me as a dancer” Fred said

comma before speech marks

“Need a new publicist, I guess.,” said Spike.

just the comma.

Hope you don't mind me pointing them out; I'm in editor mode right now. And I know I kick myself over stuff like that if it gets to a place where I can't fix it anymore.


smonster - Jul 02, 2003 9:40:36 am PDT #4751 of 10001
We won’t stop until everyone is gay.

Smonster smiling. Victor write more. t grunts happily

The vampire turned the corner and started gaining speed. As he gained ground on it, the monster ground to a halt. The woman was standing before them.

Slightly confused, don't know if it's just me. This is the female vamp, right? Or the woman Spike was trying to save?


victor infante - Jul 02, 2003 9:43:55 am PDT #4752 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Smonster and Am, edits noted and made!

Thanks!


Am-Chau Yarkona - Jul 02, 2003 9:49:33 am PDT #4753 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty

You're welcome, Victor. I have so much pendantry, it's kind of a relief to find a place it's actually wanted.