Victor, this is getting way interesting, bro.
Thanks. I hope it's not too dragged-out to follow. I'm trying to keep a lot of balls in the air, here. Please let me know if it does.
'Serenity'
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
Victor, this is getting way interesting, bro.
Thanks. I hope it's not too dragged-out to follow. I'm trying to keep a lot of balls in the air, here. Please let me know if it does.
No dragging yet.
Gonna have to set up a Victor shrine.
It is not dragging at all.
No dragging yet.
Oh, good. Because I think I may be a bit past halfway through.
Aint no drag nowhere, nohow, contrariwise. (Lewis Carroll moment)
No dragging. Much leaping and dancing with joy over here. (I love this thread; between Plei and Victor, it's given me much joy today.)
Also much nit-picking of typos:
“You didn’t strike me as a dancer” Fred said
comma before speech marks
“Need a new publicist, I guess.,” said Spike.
just the comma.
Hope you don't mind me pointing them out; I'm in editor mode right now. And I know I kick myself over stuff like that if it gets to a place where I can't fix it anymore.
Smonster smiling. Victor write more. t grunts happily
The vampire turned the corner and started gaining speed. As he gained ground on it, the monster ground to a halt. The woman was standing before them.
Slightly confused, don't know if it's just me. This is the female vamp, right? Or the woman Spike was trying to save?
Smonster and Am, edits noted and made!
Thanks!
You're welcome, Victor. I have so much pendantry, it's kind of a relief to find a place it's actually wanted.
Yeah, ditto that.