'Same Time, Same Place'
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
Buffy had taught Dawn how to fight, and then, sometime later, Faith had taught her to fight dirty.
Love this line. Your version of Dawn in the future is perfect. She's a bit of all of the others. She seems to have really taken advantage of everything that was availible to her and learned from all of it.
I like the idea of Dawn and Xander getting together eventually. I also love how Dawn was able to take on three Slayers--it seemed utterly believable.
Oh, never mind. I can't read, clearly.
Glad people are liking the story so far. There's at least two more parts, but I have real work to do, so they're gonna likely keep being teased out. Sorry.
I like the idea of Dawn and Xander getting together eventually.
Eh, I figured it worked with them getting together in their thirties or so.
I also love how Dawn was able to take on three Slayers--it seemed utterly believable.
This version of Dawn can kick serious ass. I imagine the younger slayers are scared shitless of her.
This is very nice, Victor. One question -- what's a barrelhouse kick?
This is very nice, Victor. One question -- what's a barrelhouse kick?
May be being tripped up on terminology. What's the name of the kick that arcs wide out from the body. There's a spin involved.
Victor, if they put a show together with this rev of Dawnie, I'd be cheering her on. Dayum.
There's one tense-thing and a spelling I noticed:
Three week ago, before she left England, she faced off against three young Slayers.
Week should be pluralised (typo, I bet) and the tenses are a bit off: should this be "she had faced off"? before leaving England, she had faced off? Still on first cup of coffee, so brain is wonking, but I think that's right?
And confidant - confident.
That said? GET BACK TO WORK and write more of this now, please.
There's a spin involved.
Spinning roundhouse (see down page for jumping spinning roundhouse)? Tornado kick (which is a bit more involved and aerial than a spinning roundhouse, but ends with one)?
Deb, insent.
Yeah, I'd say jumping spinning is just one step beyond spinning. I wish I'd fully learned the spinning side when I was in tae kwon do (side kick = roundhouse, I think.)
