I like the idea of Dawn and Xander getting together eventually. I also love how Dawn was able to take on three Slayers--it seemed utterly believable.
Joyce: And what did you do tonight? Dawn: Irritated Giles. I'm beginning to get why Buffy likes it so much.
'Get It Done'
Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
Anne W. - Jun 24, 2003 6:42:48 am PDT #4488 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
Am-Chau Yarkona - Jun 24, 2003 6:46:13 am PDT #4489 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
Oh, never mind. I can't read, clearly.
victor infante - Jun 24, 2003 6:46:37 am PDT #4490 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
Glad people are liking the story so far. There's at least two more parts, but I have real work to do, so they're gonna likely keep being teased out. Sorry.
I like the idea of Dawn and Xander getting together eventually.
Eh, I figured it worked with them getting together in their thirties or so.
I also love how Dawn was able to take on three Slayers--it seemed utterly believable.
This version of Dawn can kick serious ass. I imagine the younger slayers are scared shitless of her.
§ ita § - Jun 24, 2003 6:52:50 am PDT #4491 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
This is very nice, Victor. One question -- what's a barrelhouse kick?
victor infante - Jun 24, 2003 6:54:56 am PDT #4492 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
This is very nice, Victor. One question -- what's a barrelhouse kick?
May be being tripped up on terminology. What's the name of the kick that arcs wide out from the body. There's a spin involved.
deborah grabien - Jun 24, 2003 6:55:28 am PDT #4493 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Victor, if they put a show together with this rev of Dawnie, I'd be cheering her on. Dayum.
There's one tense-thing and a spelling I noticed:
Three week ago, before she left England, she faced off against three young Slayers.
Week should be pluralised (typo, I bet) and the tenses are a bit off: should this be "she had faced off"? before leaving England, she had faced off? Still on first cup of coffee, so brain is wonking, but I think that's right?
And confidant - confident.
That said? GET BACK TO WORK and write more of this now, please.
§ ita § - Jun 24, 2003 7:03:05 am PDT #4494 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
There's a spin involved.
Spinning roundhouse (see down page for jumping spinning roundhouse)? Tornado kick (which is a bit more involved and aerial than a spinning roundhouse, but ends with one)?
Anne W. - Jun 24, 2003 7:03:32 am PDT #4495 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
Deb, insent.
sumi - Jun 24, 2003 7:04:28 am PDT #4496 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!
Yeah, I'd say jumping spinning is just one step beyond spinning. I wish I'd fully learned the spinning side when I was in tae kwon do (side kick = roundhouse, I think.)
victor infante - Jun 24, 2003 7:07:27 am PDT #4497 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
I think Spinning roundhouse is what I was looking for. Thanks. It'll be changed in the edit, later!