Oh, wow, Elena ...
So Spike. So Joyce.
t checks in other files, reassures self that in my world, Joyce is still there
'Unleashed'
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
Oh, wow, Elena ...
So Spike. So Joyce.
t checks in other files, reassures self that in my world, Joyce is still there
Nice, Elena!
I'd forgotten how good this thread was for maintaining my emotional wellbeing.
Hee. When it was down, I had my LJ. It helped.
Oh, Elena, that's wonderful.
eta: I just read Dana's fic. Holy COW that's hot. I couldn't imagine Weiss and hot in the same sentence, but, wow.
For those who may not have seen the mention over at PF, I wrote a sequel to "Steam." It's called "Touch", and it's up at my website, [link] and at Shriftweb, [link]
Just, you know, if anyone cares.
Mal couldn't "look in" on Kaylee, or well, anyone, because of Serenity's layout. Right? I mean, crew quarters are downship.
Um... as I recall Kaylee's quarters, it would be quite possible to open the door and look through (down) to see where she was. Is that not right? That's what I had in mind when I wrote that.
The doors make a loudish audible metallic sound when they open. It would be possible to open it and take a look down/in, but not with any secrecy or appearance of casualness. One would have to have a reason for such intrusion, or look very odd, I'd think. And I've never seen a crew quarters door left open, since the doors are part of the ship's interior corridor.
But this is strictly my own impression, yours may certainly vary.
connie, Touch is voice-perfect and marvelously speculative. If I hadn't already commented in LJ.
Cindy, please note that this has nothing to do with you.
I really, really hate first person POV. That is probably the first thing that will make me run from a story, even faster than two words misspelled and bad grammar in the first line. I don't know why--just the whole "I" statement thing makes me shudder like I've got a spider crawling up my spine.
I imagine it's the same for people who detest the second person, which I love so very much.
I imagine it's the same for people who detest the second person, which I love so very much.
Yep, pretty much.