I do a lot of 3rd person limited POV swapping. Each section (and sometimes they overlap, so I get the same scene or parts of from a different POV) with a different narrator/voice.
Absolution (my large-for-me fic) had five different character POVs.
Jayne: 'Cause I don't know these folks. Don't much care to. Mal: They're whores. Jayne: I'm in.
'Heart Of Gold'
Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
P.M. Marc - Jun 12, 2003 7:11:59 am PDT #4068 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Cindy - Jun 12, 2003 7:14:48 am PDT #4069 of 10001
Nobody
I'll probably end up with 5. I know I'll at least end up with 3.
P.M. Marc - Jun 12, 2003 7:17:45 am PDT #4070 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
I distinctly remember just GLOWERING at Angel because he wanted to narrate. I was all like, "Hairloaf? Excuse me? What makes you think you get to say anything, fucko?"
But he insisted.
Deena - Jun 12, 2003 7:23:14 am PDT #4071 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
Finally caught up. I really enjoyed the Lilah/Buffy and the Mal/Simon. Of course, I want more V!Giles.
deborah grabien - Jun 12, 2003 7:26:28 am PDT #4072 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
"It's all right. Post-thwarted-apocalypse relief sex is something that happens to the best of us."
This is so purely and evocatively Xander at his best, it nearly made me cry.
Suggestion (grammar) for the Lilah/Buffy? Remove the apostrophe from "Faith's". It's a plural, not a possessive. But making Winnifred Burkle look voluptuous? suhNERK!
P.M. Marc - Jun 12, 2003 7:44:31 am PDT #4073 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Oh, thanks!
I was having massive typing issues last night (it was taking me about an hour to find each key) as I waited and waited for the back up of my main writing directory to finish burning.
(I edited to fix the worst of the typos, which were, well, bad, but the less obvious ones slipped through my net.)
deborah grabien - Jun 12, 2003 7:48:59 am PDT #4074 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Plei, I'm amazed you're even awake right now. BTW, do you need me in AIM for anything?
(Just went back and read Buffy/Xander, and you know what? It's about the only version and situation of that pairing I've ever come across that read naturally and right to me.)
P.M. Marc - Jun 12, 2003 7:53:53 am PDT #4075 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Nah, I'm on the laptop, and won't be AIMing until after 5 (I may turn it on, but just to make quick pings; I prefer to use it on the one that's set up the way I need it to be set up) when we install the new motherboard.
The computer is EVIL. For the record.
I'll be holed up in here, missing my email.
deborah grabien - Jun 12, 2003 7:55:35 am PDT #4076 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Hotay. Writers Group tonight (Rosie is hosting, seafood lassagne, yum) but I'll be here until probably half past six.
Yes, I am evil and off-topic. But Plei has no email, yo!
Beverly - Jun 12, 2003 11:05:39 am PDT #4077 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Am-Chau, lovely piece. But...Mal couldn't "look in" on Kaylee, or well, anyone, because of Serenity's layout. Right? I mean, crew quarters are downship.
Plei, congratulations on making Buffy/Xander real and believeble, in, as Deb may have said, the only plausible way. And how much do I love the Lilah/Buffy speculation? A lot, that's how much. "Vampire? Or would any dead body do?" (cackle!)