Plei, speaking as a supernatural writer, may I offer an initial brava!
You need Don Henley's "Miss Ghost" in the background.
Off to watch Angel....
Mal: We're still flying. Simon: That's not much. Mal: It's enough.
'Serenity'
Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies
Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.
deborah grabien - Mar 05, 2003 11:01:53 pm PST #2106 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Lee - Mar 06, 2003 12:28:31 am PST #2107 of 10001
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.
You need Don Henley's "Miss Ghost" in the background.
Now I know why I have hard such a hard time concentrating all day-- Deb has my brain. That is exactly what started going through my head when I was reading Plei's story, which I liked a lot.
Elena - Mar 06, 2003 1:55:11 am PST #2108 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.
Teppy, send me the story. I'll beta it Thursday night overnight at work. Hell, I've got the time.
Plei, that's fantastic.
"I'm in your head. Aren't you forgetting that I always see you, Wes? When you're sleeping, when you're awake, when you're alone--oh wait, I covered that one with 'always'."
Ouch.
And the ending. Damn... But, since Angelus *didn't* - so far as I know in my not having seen the new Angel state, and please don't disabuse me of the notion - you know who killed Lilah. So it makes me wonder how truthful the 'ghost' is being.
Am-Chau Yarkona - Mar 06, 2003 2:03:33 am PST #2109 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
a nice delicate touch of HoYay as well.
Wouldn't be mine without it.
Steph, I'd offer, but my Faith is pathetic. If you only want grammar, though, I'm happy to help.
Plei, that's nice. Very nice. (I should just go and read the show threads, shouldn't I? Then I'd know what actually happened, instead of tormenting myself with little snippets from fic.) I love
He felt a muscle in the side of his jaw start to twitch and took a long swallow of whisky.The detail of it, the beliveablity of it, even without the background it works. It's good.
Elena - Mar 06, 2003 2:05:21 am PST #2110 of 10001
Thanks for all the fish.
Am, I'll have that beta to you late tonight.
Am-Chau Yarkona - Mar 06, 2003 2:43:49 am PST #2111 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty
Thank you. That's most kind.
RozK - Mar 06, 2003 2:59:49 am PST #2112 of 10001
There is nothing outside the text. The text is everything that is the case. As above, so below.
Right now, just saying hi! Will post properly later.
RozK
juliana - Mar 06, 2003 6:36:13 am PST #2113 of 10001
I’d be lying if I didn’t say that I miss them all tonight…
Plei, that was lovely.
Rebecca Lizard - Mar 06, 2003 6:59:09 am PST #2114 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket
Oh! Hi, RozK.
P.M. Marc - Mar 06, 2003 9:33:25 am PST #2115 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear
Hi Roz!
Elena, I'll respond to the comments after you've seen Angel.