Teppy, send me the story. I'll beta it Thursday night overnight at work. Hell, I've got the time.
Plei, that's fantastic.
"I'm in your head. Aren't you forgetting that I always see you, Wes? When you're sleeping, when you're awake, when you're alone--oh wait, I covered that one with 'always'."
Ouch.
And the ending. Damn... But,
since Angelus *didn't* - so far as I know in my not having seen the new Angel state, and please don't disabuse me of the notion - you know who killed Lilah.
So it makes me wonder how truthful the 'ghost' is being.
a nice delicate touch of HoYay as well.
Wouldn't be mine without it.
Steph, I'd offer, but my Faith is pathetic. If you only want grammar, though, I'm happy to help.
Plei, that's nice. Very nice. (I should just go and read the show threads, shouldn't I? Then I'd know what actually happened, instead of tormenting myself with little snippets from fic.) I love
He felt a muscle in the side of his jaw start to twitch and took a long swallow of whisky.
The detail of it, the beliveablity of it, even without the background it works. It's good.
Am, I'll have that beta to you late tonight.
Thank you. That's most kind.
Right now, just saying hi! Will post properly later.
RozK
Hi Roz!
Elena, I'll respond to the comments after you've seen Angel.
Roz!
MWAH! (blowing a nice long-distance kiss) I've started reading the memoir, and will write later on today.
Steph - do you have your Faith-betas lined up? I was too wonked to function last night, but am happy to pitch in if needed.
Elena and Deb, if you could, I'll send it to you sometime before I leave work today.
