Simon: Captain... why did you come back for us? Mal: You're on my crew. Simon: Yeah, but you don't even like me. Why'd you come back? Mal: You're on my crew. Why we still talking about this?

'Safe'


Buffista Fic: It Could Be Plot Bunnies  

Where the Buffistas let their fanfic creative juices flow. May contain erotica.


Am-Chau Yarkona - Feb 27, 2003 10:32:59 am PST #1833 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty

This summing up of his character seems to have hit close to the facts, because his friendly smile broadens into a wide grin. “So BJ’s been talking about me, has he? Yeah, that’s me. Did he tell you about the time Colonel Potter nearly…”

The utter lack of curiosity I feel in the advent of another story about Korea, even told from a different point of view, is lost when a key turns in the front door.

“Peg! I’m home at last,” BJ calls. Hawkeye and I follow Erin into the hallway, he carefully moving behind me. “Hi, Erin honey. Have a good day at school?”

“Yeah. Hawkeye’s here,” she tells him, a child’s bluntness getting over any difficult moment there could have been. He hugs me quickly, not really looking at me, and then moves on to the man next to me.

“Hawkeye? It really is you!”

“The one and only.” They go to shake hands, but then one of them decides that formality can go to hell and uses the contact to pull his—friend? lover?—into a firm hug. The contact is perhaps to long, involves a little too much hip as well as shoulder, but it breaks before I can really react to it.

“Good to see you again. What are you doing these days?”

“Nothing special—living in Maine, working in a hospital with actual wards, hiding the still under the sink. You?”

“Much the same. Barring being in Maine.” They share a grin, and then BJ catches my eye. “And no still. Really, Peggy.”

I sigh heavily and pointedly, letting a little answering grin show through. BJ hasn’t joked like he used to for ages, so it’s good to see it again even if it takes a stranger to bring it out. “Are you going to just stand there, or do you want dinner?”

  • **

When I put my sewing away and headed up for bed that night, I realised I didn’t know where BJ and Hawkeye were, though it seemed logical to assume they were together. I checked on Erin—fast asleep, thumb in her mouth—and then opened the door of the guest room. Sure, I should have knocked, but sometimes a person does what they have to find out the truth.

The two of them were sitting on the bed, BJ at the pillow end with Hawkeye leaning back into his arms, and they were kissing. It seemed I’d opened the door real quietly, because they both had their eyes closed as they explored each other’s mouths. Something about the scene—the looks of contentment on their faces, the slight curve of BJ’s lips into a smile as he kissed Hawkeye, or the simple fact that these were two men, kissing—touched me. I’d say ‘deep inside’, but it was a little less emotional than that; I was glad to see BJ happy, but what I was aware of was being turned on by the sight.

I stood and watched until one of them broke the kiss (I couldn’t tell who), and then I knocked on the door. Two pairs of blue eyes opened rapidly. They moved apart with lightening speed, BJ looking decidedly sheepish. “Peggy- love- I’m…”

I smiled at him, reassuringly. “It’s okay, BJ. Sleep well, both of you. I’m going to leave the radio on overnight.”

He swallowed heavily, unsure of what to say until his—‘partner in crime’ seems appropriate, but ‘lover’ is perhaps kinder—until Hawkeye rescued him. “Goodnight, Peggy. And thank you.”

“You’re welcome, Hawkeye. Goodnight, BJ.”

“Goodnight, Peg,” BJ finally managed to get out.

I slipped out of the room and went to the bedroom I’d become so used to sleeping alone in over the past few years. What did one more night matter, if it made BJ happy? I could live with that.

End.

  • **

BTW, my main concern is that Peg's turned into a near-MarySue. Yes? No? Maybe?


deborah grabien - Feb 27, 2003 10:36:58 am PST #1834 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, nice. I haven't watched an episode of MASH in fifteen years and that brought them back very clearly indeed. Are you going to be evoking more of the post-war fifties era? There's a nice taste there already.

Question:

I may not be as clever as I think I am eve.

Ever? Even? Someone called Eve?


Am-Chau Yarkona - Feb 27, 2003 10:38:27 am PST #1835 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty

Even. I shall edit to fix, thanks.


erikaj - Feb 27, 2003 10:39:00 am PST #1836 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Deborah, I love your story, first person and all. Plei, very good, but I'm not sure what the third part of your trifecta is, either. The fork in the eye? Am, over the years I've watched many MASH eps, but haven't for a long time. I haven't thought about those characters for a long while, but you made me want to again.


deborah grabien - Feb 27, 2003 10:40:49 am PST #1837 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

(Whoops - my last post was reacting to first piece. You got the second one up fast....)

I'd like to know a bit more about Peg's personality - it really wouldn't take much. Most women of the time wouldn't be nearly that elastic about things, so she's very strong. Is this a diary she's keeping? I'm curious about her.

See, now, I'm thinking less about the show and the plot than I am about the character. Goes back to the convo with Connie last night. She's interesting to me.


Am-Chau Yarkona - Feb 27, 2003 10:40:54 am PST #1838 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty

Are you going to be evoking more of the post-war fifties era? There's a nice taste there already.

If that in any way implied that there could be a sequal, I am blind and deaf to the notion.

Edit: no, the second post satisfies that. Good.

Hum. You're then wanting me to take it out of the context in which I'm writing it ("Hey! Wouldn't it be cool in Hawkeye and BJ could actually be together without having Peg die or divorce him?") and turn it into more original fiction. Which would be good for me as a writer, I'm sure. But harder work.

I'll think about it.

I haven't thought about those characters for a long while, but you made me want to again.

In a fandom as small as M*A*S*H slash, that's quite an achivement. t grins Thanks!


P.M. Marc - Feb 27, 2003 10:45:16 am PST #1839 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

I can't get that to make sense to me. It's early (I overslept and am still barely into first cup of coffee), so it's probably my brain not turned on yet. But - what does it mean, please?

It means I changed a sentence mid-stream, got distracted and never fixed it.


deborah grabien - Feb 27, 2003 10:47:19 am PST #1840 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

You're then wanting me to take it out of the context in which I'm writing it ("Hey! Wouldn't it be cool in Hawkeye and BJ could actually be together without having Peg die or divorce him?")

No, no, not necessarily; just that a few more paragraphs about her as a human being would completely bring her to life for me, and possibly make me wonder if she was a long-lost family member on my father's (American) side. That's why I wondered if this was a diary she was keeping, or a letter she was writing. if she's talking to someone, either another person in a letter or herself in a personal diary, that becomes very easy, as opposed to a narrator in the first person telling an audience.

Damn. That's incredibly muzzily phrased. More coffee, please.


deborah grabien - Feb 27, 2003 10:49:05 am PST #1841 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

It means I changed a sentence mid-stream, got distracted and never fixed it.

(whew)


P.M. Marc - Feb 27, 2003 10:49:28 am PST #1842 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

Not that she wanted to, of course. Get the guilt bonus, that was, but it was still slightly better than going out.

Make more sense?