Which is funny, considering that my prose pieces are long rambly things.
I'm 17. Looking at linoleum makes me want to have sex.
Xander ,'First Date'
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Steph L. - Oct 09, 2002 7:09:48 pm PDT #56 of 10001
Unusually and exceedingly peculiar and altogether quite impossible to describe
Connie Neil - Oct 09, 2002 7:16:33 pm PDT #57 of 10001
brillig
Poetry is fun. I wrote some after a long dry spell in writing nearly 20 years ago now. I may have to post it.
victor infante - Oct 09, 2002 9:49:41 pm PDT #58 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
Hey, folks in the know...When one is submitting a non-fiction essay to online magazines, is it bad form to approach more than one at a time? Do I have to wait to get rejected by one to move onto the other?
Generally, yeah, unless you know for a fact they accept SS. What I do is rewrite significant sections, so I'm technically shopping different essays. Because I am mercenary.
Katie M - Oct 09, 2002 11:53:30 pm PDT #59 of 10001
I was charmed (albeit somewhat perplexed) by the fannish sensibility of many of the music choices -- it's like the director was trying to vid Canada. --loligo on the Olympic Opening Ceremonies
but in a
bold sudden
tympani of color,
russet and gold and flame.
I adore the first three lines of this section, Steph - the 'tympani of color' wins a "oh, yeah, of course, that's what it's like except I've never used those words before" from me. I'd fool with the last line, though. It feels a little... mannered? It doesn't have the same flow.
I like it, though. It does a good job of evoking that first week of real chill, when it's still a new and fabulous thing.
Beverly - Oct 10, 2002 7:57:19 am PDT #60 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Poetry is fun.
Sometimes. Sometimes it's just a job. And sometimes it's like bleeding from the eyes.
Liese S. - Oct 11, 2002 8:10:24 am PDT #61 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."
Very nice. I like both the phrasing and the concept.
Connie Neil - Oct 11, 2002 11:09:17 am PDT #62 of 10001
brillig
Test for possible future poetry posting
Checking for line breaks.
edit: hmph. OK, how do you do line breaks? I checked the quick-edit.
Steph L. - Oct 11, 2002 11:15:25 am PDT #63 of 10001
Unusually and exceedingly peculiar and altogether quite impossible to describe
Line breaks are made by hitting only one return at the end of a line, and putting < br > (w/o spaces) at the end of the line.
So this (w/o spaces in the brackets):
Here is < br >
how you < br >
do it.
Would look like this:
Here is
how you
do it.
Connie Neil - Oct 11, 2002 12:33:50 pm PDT #64 of 10001
brillig
Is this
the way?
Edit: t cue mr. burns EH-xcellent.
victor infante - Oct 11, 2002 1:24:30 pm PDT #65 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.
Big news that may go nowhere! Circle of Confusion, the agents that sold "the Matrix", amongst others, havee asked to read my newest screenplay! Odds are nothing of note will happen, but it's still the biggest agent so far to respond to me!
There is much Snoopy dancing abounding.