Yeah, but you're an amateur fry cook and I come from a long line of fry cooks that don't live past 25.

Buffy ,'Showtime'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Connie Neil - Jun 28, 2004 6:57:33 pm PDT #5507 of 10001
brillig

Ah, I am plot's bitch.

The glass on the floor is his personal Berlin Wall. He thinks we won't cross for fear of getting cut. But why else did those ugly thick clogs come back into fashion?

I crunch over to his bed. "Dude, it's not going to work. You barricade, we break down. That's how this works."

"You shouldn't be here."

"Sorry. How were you planning on getting out of here? I know, trick question."

He smirks, knowing I can't carry him. He loses the smirk when I hold up a pair of thick-soled sandals, ugliest I could find.

"They're pink. And in your size."


Polter-Cow - Jun 28, 2004 7:41:34 pm PDT #5508 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

So, does anyone know anything about Glimmer Train Press? The ease of submission (and no reading fee) is enticing, but I don't know how competitive it is and what kind of reputation it has.


§ ita § - Jun 28, 2004 7:44:29 pm PDT #5509 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

I have a Glimmer Train book. They were giving them to guests at the hostel I stayed at in Tucson a few years ago.

Never read any of the stories, though.


Gris - Jun 28, 2004 7:54:38 pm PDT #5510 of 10001
Hey. New board.

Suddenly there was a loud CRASH from the other room. Lauren jumped about six feet in the air and thought "Oh my God, what was that? Is there a burglar in the house? What do I do? Oh GOD what do I do? What if he finds me and stabs me or shoots me or RAPES me?"

She got off the bed and crept slowly to her bedroom door, opening it just a crack. There didn't seem to be any criminal activity going on in the hallway, so she snuck slowly down to the kitchen. Before opening the door, she pulled out her cell phone and dialed "911" into it - just a tap of the "Send" key and she was ready to go.

With a quick yell, she slammed open the door and stepped into the room - startling the hell out of her cat, as he licked the milk from around the broken glass pitcher at her feet.

(not edited or counted. Too lazy.)


Beverly - Jun 28, 2004 8:02:11 pm PDT #5511 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

I've read and enjoyed Glimmer Train from time to time. It's not terribly exclusive, but it does qualify as a lit'ry journal. It can't hurt to submit.


deborah grabien - Jun 28, 2004 8:29:03 pm PDT #5512 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

For Teppy's broken glass challenge.

Protective Mode

There's a word for the sensation, or perhaps a phrase. If there isn't, there should be.

She doesn't try to define it. Instead, she stands on the threshold of her back porch, staring immobile at the bits of window that are now all over her floor. The glass in indoors; someone broke it from the outside.

She's walked in through the front door. It's possible she's not alone in the house.

No words, no phrases. She moves quietly to her knife rack, and pulls out the ten-inch Henckel chef's.

"Hey, motherfucker." Her voice is deadly, pitched and dangerous. "Come on out."


erikaj - Jun 29, 2004 5:38:55 am PDT #5513 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I hope GT has a decent rep, cause they have one of my stories right now and I hope they think it's FG.


Polter-Cow - Jun 29, 2004 5:58:34 am PDT #5514 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

I hope GT has a decent rep, cause they have one of my stories right now and I hope they think it's FG.

Ploughshares apparently did a survey of some sort, and it's one of the top three literary magazines read among its readers. It looks like it's got a good rep. I hope they think your story is FG, and mine too, when I submit it. Are you doing any of the contests? I figure I might give them a try, especially the never-been-published one, since I hope not to be eligible for that one eventually.


erikaj - Jun 29, 2004 6:19:32 am PDT #5515 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

That's the one, babe. The story was betaed by Buffistas, including Nilly, so at least I can be sure I'm at my best to lose my literary virginity.


§ ita § - Jun 29, 2004 11:30:33 am PDT #5516 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

I tried very hard to get this into the past tense, where it belongs, but I can't. But now the first sentence is stuck in a different tense, and I don't have the heart to bring it current. Call it stylistic idiosyncrasy, if you will. Be kind.

Part of that same "action movie" as the turning point drabble exercise.

***********

It was different this time. Despite the officer's confusion over the phone, Carl is her friend, not her husband. And not dead.

Bruised and battered, though, she sees.

He hears the additional footsteps crunching across the hallway, and looks over slowly.

"Hey, Kit." He smiles. "Sorry about the window. And the bookshelf."

"You okay?" A bruise flowers across his cheek, and she worries.

"Yeah."

"Out of nowhere?"

"Isn't it always the way?"

She shakes her head at him, but keeps silent as the EMTs load him onto the ambulance cot.

It is different this time. But she's still a widow.