Thanks...I still feel that I've come close to something without really hitting it yet.
Big stop just to renew your license to companion. Can I use companion as a verb?
Wash ,'Ariel'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
erikaj - May 30, 2004 8:15:16 am PDT #4892 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
deborah grabien - May 30, 2004 8:16:50 am PDT #4893 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
I agree - you haven't quite hit it. It's close, though. I think there's going to be a moment, a point at which the woman in your head/the woman in the chair/the you that's out there dancing and seducing hot men all collide and then? Well. You'll hit it, whang in the gold.
Susan W. - May 30, 2004 11:42:47 am PDT #4894 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Anyone feel like beta-ing a rough draft of a synopsis? It's 6 doublespaced Courier 12 pages.
deborah grabien - May 30, 2004 8:44:05 pm PDT #4895 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Susan, still need a beta? I just got home, and happy to oblige.
Susan W. - May 30, 2004 9:06:43 pm PDT #4896 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Thanks, deb! Insent to your profile address.
deborah grabien - May 30, 2004 9:18:43 pm PDT #4897 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Susan, reading now. I have some comments - will be sending shortly. The hook is perfect, BTW.
Susan W. - May 30, 2004 9:29:56 pm PDT #4898 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Got it--thanks! I think your suggestions are right on target. Believe it or not, I'd already replaced one "devastated." It's amazing how taking frequent breaks to talk to a baby in a bassinet three feet from your computer prevents you from realizing you're repeating yourself!
deborah grabien - May 30, 2004 9:33:59 pm PDT #4899 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Oh, excellent. Thing is, since one of the things they're looking for is voice, you want to make sure you don't sound too cautious, too narrative. But there were really only those few places where it caught at me. The rest was just fine.
deborah grabien - May 31, 2004 7:48:51 pm PDT #4900 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Teppy, do we have a new theme?
Liese S. - May 31, 2004 8:02:59 pm PDT #4901 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."
I'm glad you asked, deb. I was feeling all fidgety, but I figured, holiday weekend. I was trying not to be too pushy about it.