Excuse me? Who gave you permission to exist?

Cordelia ,'Beneath You'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


deborah grabien - May 31, 2004 7:48:51 pm PDT #4900 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Teppy, do we have a new theme?


Liese S. - May 31, 2004 8:02:59 pm PDT #4901 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

I'm glad you asked, deb. I was feeling all fidgety, but I figured, holiday weekend. I was trying not to be too pushy about it.


Steph L. - Jun 01, 2004 4:35:15 am PDT #4902 of 10001
this mess was yours / now your mess is mine

Oh, ooops! The holiday was feeling like a weekend, not a Monday.

A thousand apologies.

Challenge #7 is now closed.

Challenge #8 is: BLUE. The color, the emotion, the dog from Blue's Clues, Miles Davis -- anything goes. Get drabble-y.


Amy - Jun 01, 2004 9:02:02 am PDT #4903 of 10001
Because books.

Ooh, love the new drabble challenge.

Susan, you have e on the way. Loved the chapter, and am now frustrated because I don't know what happens to anyone!


deborah grabien - Jun 01, 2004 9:10:39 am PDT #4904 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

First drabble on the Blue theme. A memory, from 1980.

A Memory of Peder

"What are you staring at?"

She jumps a bit. She hadn't realised she'd been staring, but she can't help it. Those eyes - they're amazing. They're ridiculous.

"You stared, at my eyes." His voice is as addictive as the rest of him, the liquid power of that Danish accent as aphrodisiacal as any Spanish Fly has ever been. Jesus. Six-four, built like a porn star, that voice, and those mismatched eyes? Too much. Not fair.

She actually flushes, embarrassed. He tilts her chin up toward him, smiling.

"Which eye do you like better," he asks, "the brown or the blue?"


Amy - Jun 01, 2004 9:15:21 am PDT #4905 of 10001
Because books.

Challenge #8 [blue]

It’s a lesson, the teacher said, about racism. I don’t know what that is. And Martin Luther King, but I don’t know him either.

My eyes are green, but that doesn’t count. Your eyes have to be blue for real to sit up front at story time and go to recess early. And the not-blues have to raise our hands for everything, even centers at free time. I feel like I’m in trouble, and my stomach hurts. The teachers won’t look at us, or even smile.

I said it’s not my fault about my eyes. She said that’s the point.


deborah grabien - Jun 01, 2004 9:18:28 am PDT #4906 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, damn. Amy, that's brilliant.


Connie Neil - Jun 01, 2004 9:20:26 am PDT #4907 of 10001
brillig

Amy, I've heard of a variant on that exercise, where it's the blue-eyed kids who are segregated. I'm glad my schools were too reactionary to do things like that.


Amy - Jun 01, 2004 9:51:40 am PDT #4908 of 10001
Because books.

Yup, that was second grade, a public school in Delaware. It was so awful. I mean, later I got it, but at seven, not so much. Just this awful "What did I do wrong?" and "When is this going to end?" feeling, stomach tied in knots and on teh verge of tears pretty much all day. Even then, I remember thinking they were taking it too far, the teachers, in the not smiling, not even looking at us stuff.

Here's another, because I'm all about avoiding what I'm really supposed to be doing today.

Blue Challenge, Again

Why is it, “Are you blue?” Blue isn’t sad. Blue is the sky on a crystalline, sun-spangled day, clean as a watercolor. Blue is the ocean at noon, when the sand burns through your towel. Blue is the heart of a candle’s flame. Blue is the bottom of a rocket pop, the last sticky sweetness before the rough stick. Blue is a baby’s eyes, still new, untroubled, amazed. Blue is the smoke in a crowded bar, bass pulsing through the slippery floor and your body pressed up against his, heartbeat to heartbeat.

When I’m “blue,” I’m a sour, muddy green.


Susan W. - Jun 01, 2004 9:56:49 am PDT #4909 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Susan, you have e on the way. Loved the chapter, and am now frustrated because I don't know what happens to anyone!

Got it, thanks! Will reply more fully later when I'm not moving at full gallop in an effort to make the June 1 postmark deadline for one of these contests.

Stay asleep, little baby....just 30 minutes more.....