Wow...taking a moment to marvel. And we're done.
Zoe: We're getting him back. Jayne: What are we gonna do, clone him?
'War Stories'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
erikaj - May 19, 2004 11:55:33 am PDT #4760 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
Beverly - May 19, 2004 12:02:16 pm PDT #4761 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Deb, thunderstorm approaches, and I'm packing and wrapping and stuff. If we have power, I'll read tonight. It's copied to hard drive. Gotta get off here, we figure the UPS is faulty and responsible for the electrical/computer hijinks of late.
deborah grabien - May 19, 2004 12:09:24 pm PDT #4762 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
erika, beloved, no point in marvelling until we're sure it doesn't suck.
Dana - May 19, 2004 12:29:09 pm PDT #4763 of 10001
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.
Deb, back to you.
deborah grabien - May 19, 2004 12:37:08 pm PDT #4764 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Dana, perfect! Thanks, and backsent. All suggestions were spot-on and agreed with.
back to floor-washing...
Pix - May 19, 2004 12:55:08 pm PDT #4765 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.
Deb, did you revise for Dana? If so, I'd love the new version so I don't give you redundant feedback. If not, no worries. Will be reading soon.
Polter-Cow - May 19, 2004 12:58:12 pm PDT #4766 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
I did this one in a week, with three days during which I did no work on it at all, because of the wedding weekend. Seven thousand-plus words.
Yeah, I was just marvelling actually. I was all, crap, she wrote an entire story in what, no time at all!
I'll probably get to your story in an hour or so. So if you did do Dana revisions, send 'em my way.
deborah grabien - May 19, 2004 1:26:58 pm PDT #4767 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
OK. Resending with revisions. They're damned good revisions. Dana gives good edits.
Polter-Cow - May 19, 2004 1:48:29 pm PDT #4768 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
Received, and cripes, it's long! I'm going to wait till tonight so I can read it slowly and thoughtfully.
Pix - May 19, 2004 7:14:07 pm PDT #4769 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.
Deb, read it and loved it. Revisions are excellent. Ending is twistalicious.
Feedback would be minor if any, so I'm going to wait until tomorrow to do a more thoughtful reading for the nitpicky...
But as a whole, I'd say you nailed it.