Doesn't winter seem more like archiving season?

Willow ,'Lessons'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Polter-Cow - May 11, 2004 4:36:07 am PDT #4572 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

the noble heritage of Killer Klowns From Outer Space.

That's such a great movie. I watched it so many times when I was younger.

Congratulations to your sister, NovaChild. Winning money for writing is always cool. I got a taste of it last year. Now I just have to find someone who'll, you know, publish it.


Pix - May 11, 2004 5:55:11 am PDT #4573 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

NC, your sister doesn't live in CT, does she?

The world couldn't be that small, could it?


Polter-Cow - May 11, 2004 6:02:46 am PDT #4574 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

The world couldn't be that small, could it?

Invisible Green is the brother of a girl I was friends with at Rice, so the answer is yes.


deborah grabien - May 11, 2004 6:52:00 am PDT #4575 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

That's a superb poem.

(waking up slowly here)


Katerina Bee - May 11, 2004 7:32:58 am PDT #4576 of 10001
Herding cats for fun

The link to the Clown Anthology will not work for me. I weep. I really must have a copy. Pennywise was one of the most visually frightening villians ever IMHO. "Can't sleep - clown'll eat me!"


deborah grabien - May 11, 2004 7:37:30 am PDT #4577 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I'm three pages in, and moving along.

Can I get a couple of betas shortly?


deborah grabien - May 11, 2004 7:57:16 am PDT #4578 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

My clowns' names:

They're each wearing hats (symbolising the horses). White Hat is (famine) is Munch-em-up. Red Hat (war) is Uncle Sharpie. Black Hat (pestilence) is Mister CoughNSneeze. And the fourth hat, a pale green that looks like old mould (death), is called Morty.


Katerina Bee - May 11, 2004 8:11:25 am PDT #4579 of 10001
Herding cats for fun

Deb, what do you require of beta readers?


Nilly - May 11, 2004 8:20:51 am PDT #4580 of 10001
Swouncing

Um, deb? I have papers to grade. Switching back and forth to clowns will make this experience so much more fun.


deborah grabien - May 11, 2004 8:40:22 am PDT #4581 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

OK. Will send what I've got to both.

Katerina, flow of story, consistency, whether it grabs you right off or not, smaller things like grammar and spelling, because I haven't edited any of this yet. It's only four pages right now, but I want to make sure the reader gets hooked early. If it doesn't hook, I need to know.

Sending...