The world couldn't be that small, could it?
Invisible Green is the brother of a girl I was friends with at Rice, so the answer is yes.
Well, if we followed the recipe...should be cake. A demon-violence-free-zone cake.
Lorne ,'Why We Fight'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Polter-Cow - May 11, 2004 6:02:46 am PDT #4574 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
deborah grabien - May 11, 2004 6:52:00 am PDT #4575 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
That's a superb poem.
(waking up slowly here)
Katerina Bee - May 11, 2004 7:32:58 am PDT #4576 of 10001
Herding cats for fun
The link to the Clown Anthology will not work for me. I weep. I really must have a copy. Pennywise was one of the most visually frightening villians ever IMHO. "Can't sleep - clown'll eat me!"
deborah grabien - May 11, 2004 7:37:30 am PDT #4577 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
I'm three pages in, and moving along.
Can I get a couple of betas shortly?
deborah grabien - May 11, 2004 7:57:16 am PDT #4578 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
My clowns' names:
They're each wearing hats (symbolising the horses). White Hat is (famine) is Munch-em-up. Red Hat (war) is Uncle Sharpie. Black Hat (pestilence) is Mister CoughNSneeze. And the fourth hat, a pale green that looks like old mould (death), is called Morty.
Katerina Bee - May 11, 2004 8:11:25 am PDT #4579 of 10001
Herding cats for fun
Deb, what do you require of beta readers?
Nilly - May 11, 2004 8:20:51 am PDT #4580 of 10001
Swouncing
Um, deb? I have papers to grade. Switching back and forth to clowns will make this experience so much more fun.
deborah grabien - May 11, 2004 8:40:22 am PDT #4581 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
OK. Will send what I've got to both.
Katerina, flow of story, consistency, whether it grabs you right off or not, smaller things like grammar and spelling, because I haven't edited any of this yet. It's only four pages right now, but I want to make sure the reader gets hooked early. If it doesn't hook, I need to know.
Sending...
deborah grabien - May 11, 2004 8:46:11 am PDT #4582 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
....aaaaand, sent.
Gris - May 11, 2004 8:52:54 am PDT #4583 of 10001
Hey. New board.
NC, your sister doesn't live in CT, does she?
Nope. Virginia, these days.