Look, Angel, I know you've been out of the loop for a while, but I'm still evil. I don't do errands...unless they're evil errands.

Lilah ,'Just Rewards (2)'


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A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


P.M. Marc - May 10, 2004 9:40:42 am PDT #4538 of 10001
So come, my friends, be not afraid/We are so lightly here/It is in love that we are made; In love we disappear

Thank you. I feel really pretty now.

You are! Pretty and witty and, okay, not so much with the gay, but hey! Two outta three ain't bad!


deborah grabien - May 10, 2004 9:42:21 am PDT #4539 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Man, all three of those kill. I love the line about men coming to life under them.

Another memory, same set of hands, from the rock and roll years:

Roll

Hot music, hot night, hot stage lights.

She's got her high heels on, her leather, a killer hat with a veil that she bought in Paris a long time ago.

The band is rocking; guitars trading off and the bass stitching the rhythm, oh yes, oh baby.

She's used to him playing the stadium gigs, fifty thousand screamers, faceless. This small club, impromptu, it's better.

The lead singer purses his famous lips, the bassplayers drops a walking line into the mix.

Piano time. WHAM, his hands hit the keyboard.

Later, when the show's over, his hands come home to her.


erikaj - May 10, 2004 9:50:47 am PDT #4540 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Maybe I've just not met the right girl, Plei. After all, I've got a very strong connection to both Willow and Bayliss, which points to either a same-sex experience or murdering somebody nobody will miss very much sometime in my future. I think being with a girl would have fewer legal ramifications. :)


Connie Neil - May 10, 2004 10:00:21 am PDT #4541 of 10001
brillig

I want to do this drabble, but I have to wait for another subject to come out of my head. I do not want to dwell on what's in my head. (It's in regards to death, not anything that's happened to me, in case anyone was wondering.)


deborah grabien - May 10, 2004 10:10:11 am PDT #4542 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Third one, autobiographical, as are the first two. This one has nothing at all to do with music.

Damage

I'm sorry, the surgeon says.

I'm seventeen and my hands are destroyed. They're barely recognisable; the tendons are displaced, the bones bent, the skin puckered and burned.

Wow, says the surgeon, and carefully moves the light, examining the carnage. I've never seen damage quite like this.

I picked up the back end of a Cadillac - amazing stuff, adrenalin. We fell off a mountain, I thought my goddaughter was underneath. The metal was hot.

We may not be able to fix it, the surgeon says.

Sweating, I manage to bend all the fingers of my right hand except the middle.


Polter-Cow - May 10, 2004 10:15:12 am PDT #4543 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Oh, that's funny. In a brilliant way. I like how, to me, it's in response to the surgeon's intellectual response to her emotional pain.


Beverly - May 10, 2004 10:22:26 am PDT #4544 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Geez, Deb. That's white-hot fuckyou, Dr. Kildare, isn't it?


deborah grabien - May 10, 2004 10:28:00 am PDT #4545 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Like I said, autobiographical. He was astonished by it - it took about 45 seconds to do it, too.

Man, I was a musician. Don't tell me you can't fix this shit.


Gris - May 10, 2004 10:41:10 am PDT #4546 of 10001
Hey. New board.

Man, I'm an angsty teenager if ever there was one. And I'm not even a teenager. Anyway, first submission:

I wonder what it would feel like to take her hand in mine. To take her hand, to feel her touch, to connect physically, intimately, for the first time.

And holding would lead to squeezing, and squeezing to caressing, and then, suddenly, the future...

I'll be playing with her fingers. One by one I'll count them and rub them, as I tickle her palms. Our hands, our bodies, our lives - connected. A kiss, a smile, and I'll lie down next to my love, my only love, and be happy.

If only...

If only I could take her hand.


Polter-Cow - May 10, 2004 10:47:09 am PDT #4547 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

That's ultrasappy, dude. But it's sweet.

Our hands, our bodies, our lives - connected.

This is a nice bit, and I think one that could be expanded. As it stands, it's still a bit over the top, but I like the concept.