Still nothing, Deb, and I'm off for a couple of hours. I'll check later, and get back to you soonest.
Mal: Ready? Zoe: Always.
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Beverly - Nov 03, 2003 3:03:26 pm PST #2605 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
deborah grabien - Nov 03, 2003 3:12:52 pm PST #2606 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Bev, sorry love. I made a few changes (incorporating some of Betsy and Astarte's suggestions). Hence the delay. Insent; no rush.
Deena, insending. I have something largeish to send you (or rather Kara) and I need to get to the post office, but first I need to find a box....
Beverly - Nov 03, 2003 4:52:10 pm PST #2607 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Got it, Deb, and comments sent. So excited! This is really really real, isn't it? Woooooo!
Deena - Nov 03, 2003 5:22:21 pm PST #2608 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
Deb, backflung. Sorry for taking so long. I'm excited too.
We've been having warmish weather, so if it's what I think it is, we'll be okay for a bit without.
deborah grabien - Nov 03, 2003 5:28:50 pm PST #2609 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
My husband is a sick twist.
He suggests I open the first paragraph ("well-travelled Deb") with:
Intimately experienced in the sordid fleshpots of a dozen ports...
Deena - Nov 03, 2003 5:31:31 pm PST #2610 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
Hee! I'm liking Nic more and more the more I hear about him (except for that coming home late on Avonex night stuff).
Betsy HP - Nov 03, 2003 5:33:47 pm PST #2611 of 10001
If I only had a brain...
Actually, that's a kickass lead. GO with it.
deborah grabien - Nov 03, 2003 5:34:53 pm PST #2612 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Betsy, are you serious?
Holli - Nov 03, 2003 5:37:28 pm PST #2613 of 10001
an overblown libretto and a sumptuous score/ could never contain the contradictions I adore
I like it.
Deena - Nov 03, 2003 5:39:40 pm PST #2614 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
I like it too, though I might change it to "intimately acquainted with".