Y'all see the man hanging out of the spaceship with the really big gun? Now I'm not saying you weren't easy to find. It was kinda out of our way, and he didn't want to come in the first place. Man's lookin' to kill some folk. So really it's his will y'all should worry about thwarting.

Mal ,'Safe'


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Alibelle - Oct 25, 2002 3:32:36 pm PDT #146 of 10001
Apart from sports, "my secret favorite thing on earth is ketchup. I will put ketchup on anything. But it has to be Heinz." - my husband, Michael Vartan

If anybody wants to read my story, it should be here:

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Sorry, the html is a bit funky, but I think it can mostly be understood.


Connie Neil - Oct 25, 2002 3:44:45 pm PDT #147 of 10001
brillig

Trying to read it, Ali, but I keep getting interrupted. I'll get to it tonight if nothing else.


Alibelle - Oct 25, 2002 3:50:30 pm PDT #148 of 10001
Apart from sports, "my secret favorite thing on earth is ketchup. I will put ketchup on anything. But it has to be Heinz." - my husband, Michael Vartan

No problem, Connie. Thank you!


Alibelle - Oct 27, 2002 4:52:48 pm PST #149 of 10001
Apart from sports, "my secret favorite thing on earth is ketchup. I will put ketchup on anything. But it has to be Heinz." - my husband, Michael Vartan

In the it's all about me news:

Ok, I'd really appreciate it if anyone who was planning on reading my story did not critique anything, since I've just spent about $20 making 23 copies of it, and I'm not going to change it and print new versions, so if someone makes a brilliant critique, it is only likely to make me upset because I can't implement any changes. So, um, yeah. Feel free to read it, or not, whatever you want, but the critiquing window has closed. If that means I should take down the link, I can do that too. Thanks!


Connie Neil - Oct 27, 2002 5:43:39 pm PST #150 of 10001
brillig

Oh, yeah, right, I knew there was something important I meant to do. t hangs head I'm a bad beta. But, really, such a brilliant person as Alibelle would not have produced dreck.


Anne W. - Oct 27, 2002 5:45:21 pm PST #151 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

I read the story and enjoyed it, Alibelle.


Theodosia - Oct 27, 2002 5:51:07 pm PST #152 of 10001
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"

I saved it offline....


Alibelle - Oct 27, 2002 6:09:15 pm PST #153 of 10001
Apart from sports, "my secret favorite thing on earth is ketchup. I will put ketchup on anything. But it has to be Heinz." - my husband, Michael Vartan

Thanks, guys.

Edit: My post really wasn't meant to be a chastisement, I just didn't want to get critiques after I spent money. Also, I wasn't sure if I should leave the link up, if I did not want critiques. And to say thanks again, for all the support.


Rebecca Lizard - Oct 27, 2002 8:30:58 pm PST #154 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket

since I've just spent about $20 making 23 copies of it,

Oh, dude, your English department copier is not free and all-access? t slightly smug I love Bennett Hall.


Alibelle - Oct 27, 2002 8:43:54 pm PST #155 of 10001
Apart from sports, "my secret favorite thing on earth is ketchup. I will put ketchup on anything. But it has to be Heinz." - my husband, Michael Vartan

Oh, dude, your English department copier is not free and all-access? I love Bennett Hall.

Not only is the English copier not free, it's completely hands off for students. You can make copies at the library for ten cents a copy. At Kinko's I would've spent about $37. At The Paper Clip, I spent $16.24. I feel like I got quite a deal, other than the part where it should be free, but isn't.