Hi Lizard.How's everything?
Tara: That was funny if you've studied Taglarin mystic rites and... are a total dork... Riley: Then how come Xander didn't laugh?
'Selfless'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
erikaj - Jun 14, 2003 9:33:30 am PDT #1425 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
Rebecca Lizard - Jun 14, 2003 1:48:22 pm PDT #1426 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket
The part where I'm really blissfully happy all the time, did I mention I'm in love, is great. The part where I'm worrying about failing this chemisty course is not....
deborah grabien - Jun 14, 2003 1:59:30 pm PDT #1427 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
(loving Liz's lovebliss, shooing away her chem anxiety)
erikaj - Jun 14, 2003 2:01:31 pm PDT #1428 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
Sounds like you at least have chemistry somewhere, Liz.
deborah grabien - Jun 14, 2003 5:00:11 pm PDT #1429 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Erin, when you get a chance, check your email; I beta'd your story sections and sent back two long emails, with commentary.
Rebecca Lizard - Jun 14, 2003 6:11:10 pm PDT #1430 of 10001
You sip / say it's your crazy / straw say it's you're crazy / as you bicycle your soul / with beauty in your basket
Sounds like you at least have chemistry somewhere, Liz.
<snickers>
And back to topic....
Erin G. - Jun 15, 2003 3:16:59 pm PDT #1431 of 10001
Average everyday sane/psycho supergoddess
Deb, I got the first one, but the number two email is nowhere in sight.
I'm at my folks, so I don't have access to my work here, but I'm going to print out your first email and go over it tomorrow. Thanks for such specific feedback -- it's really useful, and appreciated!
Susan W. - Jun 15, 2003 6:30:39 pm PDT #1432 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Erin, I'm working on my edit/critique and hope to have it for you this evening, but it may end up being tomorrow.
Erin G. - Jun 15, 2003 7:21:45 pm PDT #1433 of 10001
Average everyday sane/psycho supergoddess
I'm aghast, Susan.
No cookie for you!
deborah grabien - Jun 15, 2003 7:26:52 pm PDT #1434 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Heh. Erin, that's weird - I'll resend part two, which, BTW, is far more "anticipatory reader" than "stern editor".
Cookies are being made, even as we speak....