the way she will be remembered is a crazyass nutjob lying sack of shit.
Was she a crazyass nutjob lying sack of shit? If not, you should edit without regard to her death.
We gotta go to the crappy town where I'm the hero!
Wash ,'Jaynestown'
Natter 42, the Universe, and Everything
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§ ita § - Jan 14, 2006 8:00:56 pm PST #56 of 10002
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.
Lee - Jan 14, 2006 8:02:24 pm PST #57 of 10002
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.
Well, I do have the MiracleFoam spray (can? I was looking for a trigger pump or aerosol, not a can--maybe that's why I missed it--I've only used the trigger pump Scrubbing Bubbles before), so I will be testing that on its own.
Aerosole can.
Cass - Jan 14, 2006 8:03:58 pm PST #58 of 10002
Bob's learned to live with tragedy, but he knows that this tragedy is one that won't ever leave him or get better.
(can? I was looking for a trigger pump or aerosol, not a can--maybe that's why I missed it--I've only used the trigger pump Scrubbing Bubbles before)Can. Trust me on this.
Spidra Webster - Jan 14, 2006 8:04:13 pm PST #59 of 10002
I wish I could just go somewhere to get flensed but none of the whaling ships near me take Medicare.
ita beat me to it.
Allyson, I don't know you and I'm unfamiliar with your writing. But if the stuff is true and if you would have written while she was alive, why should the fact that she's now dead matter? It's not like you're writing a eulogy for that person.
brenda m - Jan 14, 2006 8:05:08 pm PST #60 of 10002
If you're going through hell/keep on going/don't slow down/keep your fear from showing/you might be gone/'fore the devil even knows you're there
I think I'm just wondering that if my book gets published, the dozens of readers who buy it will read this story and...the way she will be remembered is a crazyass nutjob lying sack of shit.
Remember that they won't be reading it now, or in the next two weeks, or the next month. So it won't come off quite the way it feels right now.
aurelia - Jan 14, 2006 8:05:39 pm PST #61 of 10002
All sorrows can be borne if you put them into a story. Tell me a story.
Would you take it?
Am I understanding correctly that it's supposed to be taken as soon as possible after the trauma? Not really the best time to have to make that kind of choice.
Cass - Jan 14, 2006 8:20:46 pm PST #62 of 10002
Bob's learned to live with tragedy, but he knows that this tragedy is one that won't ever leave him or get better.
Scrubbing Bubbles aerosol can [link]
Am I understanding correctly that it's supposed to be taken as soon as possible after the trauma? Not really the best time to have to make that kind of choice.Really a bad time to try and make that choice. Though I can see the point of it in some situations.
brenda m - Jan 14, 2006 8:21:46 pm PST #63 of 10002
If you're going through hell/keep on going/don't slow down/keep your fear from showing/you might be gone/'fore the devil even knows you're there
Am I understanding correctly that it's supposed to be taken as soon as possible after the trauma? Not really the best time to have to make that kind of choice.
Oh, I didn't get that. That's more worrisome, really. But I guess I can see some people wanting it.
DCJensen - Jan 14, 2006 8:33:43 pm PST #64 of 10002
All is well that ends in pizza.
I remember when Scrubbing Bubbles™ was just plain old Dow Bathroom Cleaner™.
Allyson - Jan 14, 2006 8:36:57 pm PST #65 of 10002
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Was she a crazyass nutjob lying sack of shit?
Yes. Likely, she was mentally ill, which I also stated. Beverly suggested putting a note at the end about her death just a few weeks before I completed the essay, which I did, and ended it by saying that I hope her troubled mind is at peace.
I think that was the best way to go about it.