I happen to be very biteable, pal. I'm moist and delicious.

Xander ,'Bring On The Night'


Natter .38 Special  

Off-topic discussion. Wanna talk about corsets, duct tape, or physics? This is the place. Detailed discussion of any current-season TV must be whitefonted.


Steph L. - Aug 29, 2005 4:16:18 pm PDT #2272 of 10002
I look more rad than Lutheranism

Steph, if ever you try online dating, "beautiful majestic semicolon" has to appear in your profile somewhere.

Yes, because I'm not celibate ENOUGH....

Cindy, a "nut graf" is, in a news article (generally), the paragraph that contains the gist of the news story. It's usually -- or, rather, in a well-written article, it SHOULD be -- very close to the beginning of the article, often the 2nd or 3rd paragraph. Though, by the same token, it's generally not the first paragraph, which is often descriptive or anecdotal, to hook the reader.

Here's an example I pulled from WDSU.com:

Katrina Weakens Further; Storm Now Category 1

NEW ORLEANS -- The Big Easy is breathing a bit easier right now.

Hurricane Katrina has spared New Orleans a direct hit, but its effects are still being felt there and elsewhere along the Gulf Coast.

Less than one hour after downgrading the storm to Category 2, forecasters lowered their assessment of the hurricane to a Category 1 storm with winds of nearly 95 mph. Officials said they expect the storm to get weaker Monday as it moves over land, but widespread damage is being reported on the southern coast of neighboring Mississippi.

The nut graf is actually the 3rd paragraph there. Specifically, the sentence in blue -- it's the gist of the article, what the story is really trying to convey.


Steph L. - Aug 29, 2005 4:24:17 pm PDT #2273 of 10002
I look more rad than Lutheranism

And there is nothing like an impromptu boring journalism lesson to kill a thread D-E-D.


§ ita § - Aug 29, 2005 4:25:51 pm PDT #2274 of 10002
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Kat, you don't have to go back as far as the fifties. I called all my teachers Miss unless I needed to distinguish them from each other.


le nubian - Aug 29, 2005 4:25:52 pm PDT #2275 of 10002
"And to be clear, I am the hell. And the high water."

Prison Break re: end of hour 1...

I HATED the tattoo. I groaned out loud and rolled my eyes. Give me a break.


Scrappy - Aug 29, 2005 4:26:45 pm PDT #2276 of 10002
Life moves pretty fast. You don't stop and look around once in a while, you could miss it.

I didn't find it boring, Teppy. I dug it and your brains a la spicy.


§ ita § - Aug 29, 2005 4:26:48 pm PDT #2277 of 10002
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

But LeN, think of it as a guaranteed reason for him to take his shirt off lots.

Doesn't that make it seem better?


Jesse - Aug 29, 2005 4:27:03 pm PDT #2278 of 10002
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

How did that work, anyway? I don't get it.


DXMachina - Aug 29, 2005 4:27:09 pm PDT #2279 of 10002
You always do this. We get tipsy, and you take advantage of my love of the scientific method.

And there is nothing like an impromptu boring journalism lesson to kill a thread D-E-D.

That's a nut graf right there. The headline could be Thread Dead!


§ ita § - Aug 29, 2005 4:27:36 pm PDT #2280 of 10002
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Am I the only one reading it nut graft? I can't be. Fess up.


le nubian - Aug 29, 2005 4:30:03 pm PDT #2281 of 10002
"And to be clear, I am the hell. And the high water."

ita, no. it is still ridiculous. Also? I don't particularly like sleeves anyway.