If I wasn't clear before, my notion was always that Danny is the one who does the deed. A way to get some Danny/Mel motion in one pinging ricochet of an episode.

Ah, I took it the other way around, as Danny figuring out some vigilante justice went down and covering for it out of solidarity. I guess I'm just fond of the notion of female characters who don't wait for the guys to do the protecting or avenging.

Agreed, Matt, but I wanted Mel to be four square against Danny's actions. He thought he was protecting, and she's furious. Looking down a road I'll never travel.

So just finished the latest revision. Is it wrong to just start posting random non-spoilery lines 'cause I'm all punchy?

If that's wrong I don't want to be right.

What would be wrong is posting random lines that never occur.

Which is totally something I'd do and then laugh and laugh when people get frustrated when they never hear them.

I think I'm sitting on the Mean bench today.

Here's a couplet I actually cut today, then, sarameg:

He: What is that?

She: The technical readouts to that battle station!

Warms my black little heart.

Do another one!!!

Aw, c'mon Unca Tim, tell us a story.

Okay, so here's my randomness, then I must bathe.

"People finger that stuff."

"Them Columbine boys weren't teased as much as what's on her head."

"I'm a nervous muncher."

"Last thing we need is someone we'll be competing against answering your pants."

"Overpriced luxury suite and craptastic stationary supplies. Try the night stand, next to the Gideon."

"Your obsessively bitter solitaire version of the license plate game."

"Are you a serial killer? You'd tell me if you were, right?"

"Let's see what we're down to after that pecan-log."

And finally...

"I promise this'll all make sense later."