No, no, no, sir. No more chick pit for you. Come on.

Riley ,'Lessons'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


§ ita § - Nov 20, 2013 11:25:36 am PST #8771 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

When people write that story that hinges on it being Dean's first visit to New Orleans I just bite the inside of my cheek and don't quote the line from the relevant episode.

At least I do now. The first time I saw that I PMed "Oh, know what's funny? Dean blah blah blah" and she took it well on the surface but I felt like shit the moment I hit send, and I have no idea why that took so long.

I like being helpful and I hate seeing wrong things, but wow is that sometimes not the point.

Regionalism is something I don't mention unless the writer is totally stinking with it, or they make a request for help. I never do more than a few, because I don't work for strangers, but a "drop the whilsts and bloodys in dialogue" doesn't cost anything.

Which reminds me--I also meant to ask--regionalisms outside dialogue in a story that's strongly set somewhere? To be avoided wholesale? Including spelling? Not important unless it's tight POV? What's the what?


Connie Neil - Nov 20, 2013 12:19:10 pm PST #8772 of 10434
brillig

I wouldn't mind "whilst" showing up in regular usage more. It amuses me when it shows up in fics, like an unconscious ID tag on the author.


§ ita § - Nov 20, 2013 12:30:04 pm PST #8773 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

As long as it's not Dean Winchester or Tony Stark using it, fine. I grew up saying it, after all. But the amount of bad American dialogue--my god, I didn't know that many non-Americans were writing fic. That's good for the diversity of the fandom, bad for the flow of the speech.


Matt the Bruins fan - Nov 20, 2013 2:39:10 pm PST #8774 of 10434
"I remember when they eventually introduced that drug kingpin who murdered people and smuggled drugs inside snakes and I was like 'Finally. A normal person.'” —RahvinDragand

Yeah, it seems like most of the fic being generated in fandoms I read (SPN, Teen Wolf, Avengers Cinematic Universe) is by this huge influx of British writers, many of whom seem unable to pick up the difference between characters' speech patterns and their own despite watching the show.

I won't even get into how unlikely it is for Tony Stark to brew up a spot of tea in the afternoon...


Connie Neil - Nov 20, 2013 2:47:41 pm PST #8775 of 10434
brillig

It's the references to benches in the kitchen as opposed to counters that always makes me blink. Then again, in Tony Stark's kitchen, the odds of the counters being used as workbenches is high.


§ ita § - Nov 20, 2013 3:02:12 pm PST #8776 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Do we know Tony has a kitchen?

(I've never heard a kitchen counter called a bench. Maybe it's regional?)


Connie Neil - Nov 20, 2013 3:39:10 pm PST #8777 of 10434
brillig

In Tony Stark's house are many kitchens. At least in fic.


Dana - Nov 20, 2013 3:39:49 pm PST #8778 of 10434
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.

Because where else would the Avengers have their team breakfasts?


§ ita § - Nov 20, 2013 4:06:30 pm PST #8779 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Because where else would the Avengers have their team breakfasts?

In the breakfast nook. Where did you grow up?


Dana - Nov 20, 2013 4:09:17 pm PST #8780 of 10434
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.

In a kitchen not big enough for Hawkeye to perch on top of the fridge.