Buffy? I like that. That girl's so hot, she's buffy.

Forrest ,'Conversations with Dead People'


Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?

This thread is for fanfic recs, links, and discussion, but not for actual posting of fanfic.


§ ita § - Nov 20, 2013 4:06:30 pm PST #8779 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Because where else would the Avengers have their team breakfasts?

In the breakfast nook. Where did you grow up?


Dana - Nov 20, 2013 4:09:17 pm PST #8780 of 10434
I'm terrifically busy with my ennui.

In a kitchen not big enough for Hawkeye to perch on top of the fridge.


WindSparrow - Nov 20, 2013 4:10:04 pm PST #8781 of 10434
Love is stronger than death and harder than sorrow. Those who practice it are fierce like the light of stars traveling eons to pierce the night.

As long as it's not Dean Winchester or Tony Stark using it, fine.

Ok, I can't say I have ever heard Stark say "whilst" but I certainly use it in conversation.


Matt the Bruins fan - Nov 20, 2013 7:36:17 pm PST #8782 of 10434
"I remember when they eventually introduced that drug kingpin who murdered people and smuggled drugs inside snakes and I was like 'Finally. A normal person.'” —RahvinDragand

It works if you're writing Chandler Bing too, but not the aforementioned characters.


WindSparrow - Nov 20, 2013 7:41:02 pm PST #8783 of 10434
Love is stronger than death and harder than sorrow. Those who practice it are fierce like the light of stars traveling eons to pierce the night.

Some writers click with the voices of certain characters better than they do others.


Beverly - Nov 20, 2013 10:58:03 pm PST #8784 of 10434
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

I caught a lot of flack in comments for a psychiatric diagnosis and recommended treatment. One dear ESL person asked, "Is it correct that you will never spoken to a mental health professional person?" I thanked her sweetly for her comment.

Two years after the fic was posted, it got a comment last week, advising those commenters, "Actually, the diagnosis was likely correct, given the symptoms. And that course of treatment is often recommended, with far less side effects than formerly, and with significant success."

So, you know, I'm all vindicated.


erikaj - Nov 21, 2013 6:59:11 am PST #8785 of 10434
Always Anti-fascist!

I've noticed that Brits have "a coffee' and the Americans I grew up around have "some coffee". Which I point out for no real reason except it would be hard to be a spy and have to watch for those little things all the time.


Matt the Bruins fan - Nov 21, 2013 7:25:52 am PST #8786 of 10434
"I remember when they eventually introduced that drug kingpin who murdered people and smuggled drugs inside snakes and I was like 'Finally. A normal person.'” —RahvinDragand

I've pointed out the use of "flat" rather than "apartment" or "place" to an author I really like, but my overall comment was very complimentary (it was a fun story!) and she seemed thankful for the input.


§ ita § - Nov 21, 2013 3:00:05 pm PST #8787 of 10434
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

You know what? Just put your AU in Britain and don't explain why. I just bumped into an SPN AU in Croatia for no apparent reason, but it was replete with OCs named Karynne, so I didn't bother. If you do that with enough aplomb you can get away with it.

And the OC thing. I'm not one of those readers who fails a fic based on the existence of an OC, or even /OC, but if you can smell it from the summary, come on. Tag it appropriately, and we can adjust our searches in response. But also frustrating is when you think "If you'd just named her Darcy, you wouldn't have had to give Jane a new intern/breakfast partner--there's no noticeable difference between your OC and a nearby canon character". If whatever part of your ego that OC is stroking is more important than canon, I'll probably bail on the story.


Connie Neil - Nov 21, 2013 3:02:32 pm PST #8788 of 10434
brillig

It's handy that the Avengers universe has a ready-made Mary Sue/self-identifiable character in Darcy. She lets authors who want to insert themselves into the story kind of avoid the Dreaded OFC Who's Just Like Them.