Buffy! If I wanted to fight, you could tell by the being dead already.

Glory ,'Potential'


The Great Write Way, Chapter Two: Twice upon a time...  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


buffysmglover - Aug 11, 2007 3:29:12 pm PDT #9247 of 10001
Tim Cox - Buffy: Anya, that thing you created burst through solid pavement and ate her dog. Anya (anguished): Oooh, puppy!

ONE WORD, AN ESCAPE, NEVER! timothy cox

if only there was a word

one word for all i feel

the one word to erase it all

like she wants

like i want it to come slow ever so slow

and as it comes let it be sudden

and invisible to all that i feel

just one touch,

one touch and she'll heal

but i will never

so all is lost forever

the last take

if only it could

make me feel so real

no more sidelines

not another deal

just needs to be right

for both in the light

as the curtains are drawn

and the set come crashing

crashing into a heavy fall

hoping to help us all

nothing will ever help

ever stop

ever heal

for the pain that encircles my head

not in the form of a halo

but of heat waves of confusion

my brain exploding soon

but nothing will ever help

and as the feeling of nothingness

and of life being nothingness begins to slow

a new feeling sets in and i know it will only get worse

there is but one hope of a future

beyond what just came and passed

and it is that it might come again

and let it be that when it may return

it returns not for me

but for the lost soul who cant find her future

and doesnt want it

and therefore doesnt deserve it

pity on those who want to end the suffering

but pity more on those who want to go back in time

for doing so will only make them have to relive the

very moment they must escape

in life

in death

in anything that matters and all that doesn't

there is no escape

no pain no ending to anything

including this never-ending poem that wakes and

sleeps inside of me from day to day

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AN EDITED VERSION OF THIS NEXT POEM IS BEING PUBLISHED BY POETRY.COM

The Curse

When the neighborhood forgets its best,

And brings out all its worst,

He lets it out,

With just one shout,

And falls into the curse.

It takes him places he couldn't dream,

It takes him back and forth.

He goes to Hell,

Lives in a cell,

And learns of what he's worth.

Just one week in Hell is all it takes,

To bring out this kid's hate.

For his mother,

For her brother,

Everyone in the state.

Then eight hours for seven more days,

As the end of the walk.

He goes to school.

He acts all cool.

Then kids begin to talk.

Almost two years more and still on pills.

Taking them now and then.

He's feeling fine,

Showing no sign,

Of needing medicine.

Until the woman who begot him,

Rips his support away.

His loving aunt,

Who now he can't,

Talk to on a bad day.

Inside himself is three months of pain.

Wanting to restore life,

Maybe to kill,

He pops a pill

And cuts his wrist by knife.

At just a single moment's notice,

She's given back to him.

Nothing is right.

Can't be that night.

When it is all so dim.

So the curse shall always stay with him.

It will define the boy.

It will remain.

He'll be insane.


Atropa - Aug 11, 2007 3:48:35 pm PDT #9248 of 10001
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

I really need to take my brain out and slap it around some. I've got two stories requested, and all my brain is doing is dithering.

Connie, go write. Just write, and don't worry about if it's any good (tho' I'm sure it will be). Dithering does nothing but paralyze you and keep you from writing. So says the lady finally tackling the 2nd draft of her book proposal. Go, shoo! Write!


erikaj - Aug 11, 2007 4:12:17 pm PDT #9249 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Not bad, newbie. Yeah, Connie, you write good fanfics. And even the worst story is better than the best bomb. Or so I tell myself when I'm all "You're boring, played out and have stupid hair." about myself.


erikaj - Aug 11, 2007 4:12:19 pm PDT #9250 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Susan W. - Aug 11, 2007 5:50:19 pm PDT #9251 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Flitting in briefly from slow dial-up land for more Name That Character. In this case urgent, since Sergeant Nameless is a key player in the next scene I'm planning to write:

Is my crusty, ugly, bad-ass, somewhat criminal but more or less on the side of the angels sergeant Davey Bacon, Davey Baines, or Davey Ball?


amych - Aug 11, 2007 5:51:14 pm PDT #9252 of 10001
Now let us crush something soft and watch it fountain blood. That is a girlish thing to want to do, yes?

Davey Ball


DebetEsse - Aug 11, 2007 5:51:59 pm PDT #9253 of 10001
Woe to the fucking wicked.

My gut reaction is Bacon, and, given that I've just had chocolate pudding to appease the inner food gods, I think that's not because of the yum.


Laga - Aug 11, 2007 5:53:58 pm PDT #9254 of 10001
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

Davey Ball has a nice ring to it but he would have been teased mercilessly as a child.


Susan W. - Aug 11, 2007 6:03:20 pm PDT #9255 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

I like Ball, but I'm afraid it's too punny on a variety of levels. But sometimes punny isn't such a bad thing, and it *is* a real name, so I waffle undecidedly.


erikaj - Aug 11, 2007 6:05:15 pm PDT #9256 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

If you like the pun, and he makes life hard on people, maybe Baines is better.